ek choti se ghazal ..........

Azam_1 · May 2, 2002, 11:26am

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jahaan jahaan mujhe sehraa dikhaai deta hai meri tarhaan se akela dikhaai deta hai

ye ek abr kaa Tukraa kahaan kahaan barse
tamaam dasht he pyaasa dikhaai deta hai

ye kis maqaam pe laai hai justaju teri
jahaan se arsh bhi neechaa dikhaai deta hai

jahaan jahaan mujhe sehraa dikhaai deta hai
meri tarhaan se akela dikhaai deta hai

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Shakeb Jalali

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I am like an Open Book Except for the few pages of my past, My life is an empty book. It takes the shape of a mystery, To me it does at least. For I cannot tell what happens next, Too many cliffhangers and too much suspense. But its clues all lead eventually to the same place, Unfortunately it does not say where. It only says get the next book, For in this one you’ ve ran out of room.

speed_master · May 2, 2002, 11:42am

nice

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Azam_1 · May 2, 2002, 2:55pm

shukraan master jee !!!!

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Mahee · May 2, 2002, 3:01pm

bohat khobsuret azam jee. very nice

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mohabat aesa derya hai
k baarish rooth bhi ja a
to pani kum nahi hota!

Sirfarosh · May 2, 2002, 3:05pm

ye kis maqaam pe laai hai justaju teri
jahaan se arsh bhi neechaa dikhaai deta hai

bohat aa'la hai ji
keep it up.

~^Sar faroshi ki tamanna ab hamaare dil meN hai
Dekhna hai zor kitna bazoo-e-qaatil meN hai.^~

chand_chehra · May 2, 2002, 4:59pm

very nice1

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MÙhb@t kÀ ÃnÒkhå SîÌSîÎã Hãï
KÆhî ý@$®Úb Káhï kÃ®BàÎå H@ï

Azam_1 · May 2, 2002, 5:03pm

Shukraan moon face jee

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Ek_Shairah · May 2, 2002, 5:45pm

Nice one

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Keep it up

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Thanx for sharing

Life is like a piano — what you get out of it,
Depends on how you play it.

m_isabah · May 2, 2002, 6:38pm

… love the ghazal .. esp this shair

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thank you

To see a world in a grain of sand
And heaven in a wild flower
Hold affinity in the palm of your hand
And eternity in an hour

Azam_1 · May 2, 2002, 8:48pm

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you are always welcome Shairah jee

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Azam_1 · May 2, 2002, 8:50pm

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same here m_isabah jee .. this ghazal n esp. that shair is ma fav. too

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ne ways u r always welcome **

NikamiJano · May 2, 2002, 11:46pm

[quote]
Originally posted by Azam#1:

ye kis maqaam pe laai hai justaju teri
jahaan se arsh bhi neechaa dikhaai deta hai

jahaan jahaan mujhe sehraa dikhaai deta hai
meri tarhaan se akela dikhaai deta hai

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V nice thanks 4 sharing

~pochteY ho wo kidheR gaya
daRd buN kaR
meRay dil maiN uteR gaya~

Gemini_the_Great · May 2, 2002, 11:59pm

[quote]
Originally posted by Azam#1:
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ye ek abr kaa Tukraa kahaan kahaan barse
tamaam dasht he pyaasa dikhaai deta hai

ye kis maqaam pe laai hai justaju teri
jahaan se arsh bhi neechaa dikhaai deta hai

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nice choice :)

Azam_1 · May 3, 2002, 1:51pm

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shukraan Nikami jee

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Azam_1 · May 3, 2002, 1:52pm

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Thanks GTG jee

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MAREEZ_E_ISHQ · May 3, 2002, 1:59pm

khube hamma buhat hi khube.

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aan chabaate huwe dehli walay style mein:

Azam_1 · May 3, 2002, 2:31pm

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nawazish karam shukriya meharbani Mareez-e-Ishq sahab

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