Ek Azad Nazm

Arts & Culture Poetry ( Intikhaab & Sho'ra-e-Gupshup)
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Kis ne yeh hath par lakeeren banain qismat ke khel main yeh zindagi sajai hum se poocha hota hum se kaha hota taqdeer ke is khel ko samjha to diya hota hum kionkar dil lagate hum kion kar unko chahte.

woh kehne lage kal ke
main badal gaya hon
waqt ne dia hai dhoka
kal main ja raha hon
apna khayal rakhna
na yeh malal rakhna
har roz muskurana
apni shadi par bulana
meri majbori ko samajhna
mujh ko tum maaf karna

mere haath main uski t-shirt
mere haath main hi reh gai
uski pasand ka black color
aankhon pa mere cha gaya
uski awaaz mere kaano main
sorry sorry karti rahi
pehli baar uski baat
meri samajh aai nahin
koshish karke bhi main usko
kujh bhi keh pai nahin.

Gar main rodeti to shayad
woh itna kuch na keh pata
kia mujh ko rota dekh kar
woh shayad yahin pe ruk jata
main bhi kitni pagal hon
khud se sawal karti hon
uske jaane ke baad bhi
main roz malal karti hon
roti hon roz uski yaad main
qismat ko kosti hon main.

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Nice...
Thank you for sharing...

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Beautiful :slight_smile:

:bravo:

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:k:

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:k:

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Sigh............

Baas bohat ho giya ....

bohat khoob

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bohat acha Dania, keep it up.

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Wonderfull…:k:

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Re: Ek Azad Nazm

[QUOTE]
*Originally posted by Dania_2000: *


Kis ne yeh hath par
lakeeren banain
qismat ke khel main
yeh zindagi sajai
hum se poocha hota
hum se kaha hota
taqdeer ke is khel ko
samjha to diya hota
hum kionkar dil lagate
hum kion kar unko chahte.

woh kehne lage kal ke
main badal gaya hon
waqt ne dia hai dhoka
kal main ja raha hon
apna khayal rakhna
na yeh malal rakhna
har roz muskurana
apni shadi par bulana
meri majbori ko samajhna
mujh ko tum maaf karna

mere haath main uski t-shirt
mere haath main hi reh gai
uski pasand ka black color
aankhon pa mere cha gaya
uski awaaz mere kaano main
sorry sorry karti rahi
pehli baar uski baat
meri samajh aai nahin
koshish karke bhi main usko
kujh bhi keh pai nahin.

Gar main rodeti to shayad
woh itna kuch na keh pata
kia mujh ko rota dekh kar
woh shayad yahin pe ruk jata
main bhi kitni pagal hon
khud se sawal karti hon
uske jaane ke baad bhi
main roz malal karti hon
roti hon roz uski yaad main
qismat ko kosti hon main.

[/QUOTE]

Did you write this yourself? Very impressive!

The best I ever came up with was a

"Dukh ki chaddar
Yaad ka powder
Tere gaal ki lali
Mere baal pe chowder

Dukh ki dubli patli billi
Sukh ke moote moote chhohe
Bhonk rahe the mere ghar pe
Oodh ki nikli chaddar ghar se bint-e-zoq"

And even that was a rip-off of an old Pakistani stage play!

No seriously, I suck at urdu but I love this sher:

~ Mere haathon ki lakeeron mai izzafe hain gawah
Maine pathar ki tarah khud ko tarasha hai bohat ~

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D-2 wow amazing.... if this is ur own then im sure ur soul is so beautiful :)

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:)