eik shair

solomon · December 17, 2006, 6:45am

meryi yeh saans amanat hai teryi yadon kyi
toot ker is sey bhi ziyada tujhay chahoon kaiysay

Amal · December 17, 2006, 4:30pm

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Nice one :k: :~) Welcome to Poetry Froums solomon

sad_affect · December 17, 2006, 5:29pm

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WoW its lush bt i wanna little change in it hope u dont mind

meryi "HER" saans amanat hai teryi yadon kyi
toot ker is sey bhi ziyada tujhay chahoon kaiysay

solomon · December 17, 2006, 5:51pm

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thanks to both of you,thanks amal bhai for welcome,thanks sad effect for correction,actually it is my first post at this forum

takmeel · December 19, 2006, 3:32am

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welcome SOLOMON
n sher ofcourse nice

MARRIED_NY · December 20, 2006, 4:45pm

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bohat khoon sol bhai,,its really nice aur gupshup ki duniya mai khush amdeed..

solomon · December 20, 2006, 5:04pm

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thanks to all of you for appreciation and welcome

IS · December 20, 2006, 8:24pm

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NIce shair

Jhanjharewali · December 21, 2006, 7:11am

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Kiya sitamgar entry maari hai Solomon bhai....welcome!

solomon · December 26, 2006, 2:45pm

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thanks for liking it