Eid - Punjabi

Arts & Culture Poetry ( Intikhaab & Sho'ra-e-Gupshup)
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its my friend’s poem, pujabi main hay, agar kuch samajh na aye to yahaan forum par samjhanay walay bohot say hongay

Eid Guzer gye sadee kalay kalay
koi ji na aya saday mahlay

sanoo na hoye tayre deed
sade palay ki hoyee eid

saday nalon tay bakra changaa
rub de rah chay hoya qurbaan

dil gurday ,khrraoray ,chanpan
kalyjiyan,tilli vee asee pakaaiyan

doiyan hila hila kamlay ho gaye
bertan dho dho chalay ho gaye

saray lookan nay khoob dawtan uraiyan
bualwa udekde reh gaye sade ankhiyan

phone noo vee se koi sakta taree
bell udee baji na saare deharee

phir sanoo cy dee yad ayee
asee apni eid ithay manayee

                                   ***Rukh***

“cy” is a forum where she actually posted it :smiley:

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Re: Eid - Punjabi

nice work…my best wishes to her :k:

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Re: Eid - Punjabi

Wow... poori poem parh key soch main parr gayi thi key yeh CY kya hota hai.. Thanks for the explanation. And it sure is a nice poem.. so realistic... and especially it's good, because it's very hard to write in punjabi :-)

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Re: Eid - Punjabi

Good one :smiley: :k:

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Re: Eid - Punjabi

thnx all, i'll surely fwd ur comments/regards
and yes its a good one, its very difficult to write in punjabi, but its very well written, specially the doiyan hila hila kamlay ho gaye part :D

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Re: Eid - Punjabi

/\ Yup, very well written... It was sad and funny at the same time... :-)