GS kay sho’ra say guzarish hai key woh EID kay Lamhay** ki theme per appni Nazam-Ghazal-Nsr-Ashaar es thread mai perootay jain aur es ko aik munfarid thread banaye.
Poetry app ki appni honi chaye, yaan phir es kay esitmal ko app ko ijazat ho.
Aglay saal inshallah Gupshup **EID per yeh eBook ** online kernay ka irada rakhtay hain.
Khayal rahay kay app apna naam neechay zaror lekhain.
Sirf es hi thread mai post kerain aur alag say thread na kholay allawa EID kay. This will make archiving work much easier and practicle.
Urdu,Panjabi English + other languages are acceptable.
GS members are invited to archive and contribute their personal work in poetry or text insighted to **EID kay Lamhay ** This poetry must be original and you own work.
GupShup intends to publish an online ebook in this regard and would be widely accessible and Inshallah will be ready by next year EID.
Salamz Raino bhai this is the second time you have told to write a poem and meiney eik aur ghazal likhi so arz kya hia ...
Sochtey hianh tujh ku kya thoufa deien Eid pey
dastoor hai dunya ka seney sey lagana
hum kuon na tughey seney ki dharkan hi bana lien
Ankuon meien basa key tere chehrey ku aye haseen
hum Hilal-e-Eid ki khuhsiyan ka maza lein
Shamil hu meri Eid mei teri DeeiD Bar-e-ha
Sang terey hum iss sall sab Eiduon ku mana lien
ankhuon sey tarashey huey sab jazbey wafa key
tabasum ki lari mei peru kar tugh ku duaa dien
Naz Eid key lamhat mei bari sadgi sey hum
ankuon ku jhuka kar yeah ghzal tugh ku suna dien
Eid hai ayadat-e-mazi ki ek shaam - Haathoun mai haath deye woh pal
zindagi bher meray saath rahain gay
mer ker bhi shayad yeh na bhol paon ga- teri judai mai hai chuppi
meri maut - ab yeh aye gi kis pal kaun kiya janay
sirf etna he keh sakta houn kay us din Eid hogi - jab zamana appni appni magan mai , khushoun kay nashaay mai chuor hoga - aur yeh ahhh-o-saski koi na sun paye ga,,
Meray leye to Eid hai ayadat-e-mazi ki ek shaam,,,
Tahir
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