^^^ Eid Ka Bakra ^^^

I love sharing this when Eid is near. Enjoy and Eid Mubarak! :rotfl:

Kash iss eid par main tera bakra hota
Aur kissi ne naa sahi, tu ne to mujhe pakra hota
Tu hina lagey hathon se mujhe pathey khilaati
Thorey thorey nahi sarey akathey khilati
Tu mujhe “main main” kar ke bulaati
Aur sham ko gali main saath ghumati
Mere pass gaari na sahi chakhra hota
Kash iss eid par main tera bakra hota

Tu meri suhbat par naaz karti
Bila-jhijhak mujhe aashna-e-raz karti
Agar mera raqeeb mujhe chehra karata
Seeng marta foran usse takar karata
Raat ko sardi main bahir akra hota
Kash iss eid par main tera bakra hota

Phir eid par zibah ho jata main
Teri khatir cut mar jata main
Teri muhabat ne kuch iss tarah jakra hota
Kash iss eid par main tera bakra hota

EDIT: Ok I have managed to track down the original author and it is none other than our Residential Poet AQ :hooray:

Good job AQ. Very well written :biggthumb

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meye sedkeye jaoon, Eid ka bekra.
best,

Dushwari aapi

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:omg: Shukriya GS per bantny ka :lajawab:
PS: Wah Musawir hony ky sath sath Shair bhi hu wah!buhat khub

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Ok I have managed to track down the original author and it is none other than our Residential Poet AQ :hooray:

This piece of work, which is now spread all over the net without giving credit to the original author is none other than AQ’s. Good job AQ. Very well written :biggthumb

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**:smilestar:Apni nahi thi tu Intikhab ky bajaay shar-o-gapshup main kion post ki **
PS: Mujy shak ho rah atha ky yeh AQ ki hai magar itni deeda dalyri ki umeed na thi tum sy

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The author was unknown. As soon as I found out, I came here and updated you peeplan :smilestar:

EDIT: I don’t visit poetry a lot. I was reading someone else’s poetry in this forum and as soon as I got done, I posted this in the same forum :naraz:

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^^ Yehi tu main bhi soch rahi thi zindagi main pehli bar tumhin yahan dykha hai:hmmm:

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Agar mujhe issi cheez ka darr na hota jo AQ ke saath hua hai, to main bhi apni poetry post kar deta, though it is not that great :D

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^^:cb: Tu tumhara bhi dil shil tota hai ky shairi kerny lagy:wink:
PS: AQ ky sath nahi GS ky sath bura howa ky amal ky baad dosra asli shair Poetry section chor giya:(

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i take my sedqa back :>
best,

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hm hm.
aur kutch, Nemo bhai?
peeplan. mh-

best,

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Hahah that was funny :cb:

Funny but not cool man, I want another one if ur gonna take the first one back, i don’t care :naraz:

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Nemo,

ha ha, he he. jao meye nahi boltee.
itna acha kalam tha, AQ ka kyoon bhela bana diya?
but, is it really his?
& please write your own, poem, dear brother. :>

best,

Dushwari

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Yes it’s his. I was not aware of that because I had found it on the net long time ago and saved it. As soon as I became aware of it, I posted it here to give credit where it was due :smiley:

I would post mines but I have the fear of what happened to AQ, though my stuff will not even be worthy of spreading it :cb:

Ok I’ll post one in a little bit but I am telling you ahead of time, I am not a genius at urdu so it’s not that great :frowning:

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does he know, you pasted his poem here?? he will be really upset. poor soul.
dont you know how protective he is of his poems?
& rightly so, he writes very well.
aienda aisa nahee kerna. :>

best,

Dushwari

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He knows it. He does not mind but if he does change his mind at later stage, I will gladly edit my first post and delete it or PM the mod myself to have it deleted :)

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:)

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aww nice:D work by AQ