Ehsas ka Mausem

Arts & Culture Poetry ( Intikhaab & Sho'ra-e-Gupshup)
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Tu na janey, key seb jug jaaney
Teri kashma-kash ka asfana kiya hua?
Bey zarer manoos tha tu bohet
Tow phir teiree ulfet ka kasara kiya hua?
Kaheen mukarer na hua jeb wohh
Phir yoon teri hasti ka thikana kiya hua?
Rivayatoon kee tow rivayet hey rivayetein
Teri paee hove ka khona kiya hua?
…
Semhjh na saka, mausem aik ehsas ka tu
Teri taleb madad ka ubb kiya hua?
Faket aik ehsas ka mausem
Ger mhessoos ker sakey tu,
Teb phir dekh sakey tu, keye
Teri khoee huovee kushiyoon ka,
Na-paee huovee khusiyoon ka,
Phir sey pana kiya hua…

Dushwari

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Re: Ehsas ka Mausem

Nice..

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Re: Ehsas ka Mausem

i liked the overall idea Dushwari...

may i suggest to revise a few things here and there if you do not mind :)

also, in the following line:

Na-paee huovee khusiyoon ka

lafz-e-"Na-paee" seems a bit informal in literary world... a replacement like "Laa haasil" can be used....

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Re: Ehsas ka Mausem

thanks, redidentity.

no, i dont mind that AQ. thanks for suggesting improvement :)
best,

Dushwari