Check out my rendition in this link:Jiss Din Se Daikha Hai Tum Ko Sanam, Bechain Rehte Hain Uss Din Se Hum. by TS4 on SoundCloud - Create, record and share your sounds for free
Original recording (Short version):
Jhankaar recording 
(Long version)
Re: Easy Listening - Jiss Din Se Daikha Hai Tum Ko Sanam, Bechain Rehte Hain Uss Din
Emotionnnnnnns 
where are the Emotions?? Mean it what you sing!!
Main tumhe peet peet ke achha singer banaongi 
because I see your voice is good, but you just lack EMOTIONS and FEEL!!
Re: Easy Listening - Jiss Din Se Daikha Hai Tum Ko Sanam, Bechain Rehte Hain Uss Din
Echo ke baghair post karain please.
Re: Easy Listening - Jiss Din Se Daikha Hai Tum Ko Sanam, Bechain Rehte Hain Uss Din
OK, TS, for your learning, let me post a rough recording I just did for you, to make you feel the difference.
PAR KIYA KARUN sentence is something I messed up with because I felt my housemate wokeup 
So dont judge me for the track..I just want to tell you how you can sing a song with feelings!!
Let me upload!
Re: Easy Listening - Jiss Din Se Daikha Hai Tum Ko Sanam, Bechain Rehte Hain Uss Din
Now what I felt was, no.1, you went very slow through out and no.2, you are pronouncing every word very Carefully!! Dont let the song rule your brain, your brain & heart should rule your song!!
Here I go!
Tum mere ho by Queen_GS on SoundCloud - Create, record and share your sounds for free
Re: Easy Listening - Jiss Din Se Daikha Hai Tum Ko Sanam, Bechain Rehte Hain Uss Din
Very nice.
I don't have that kind of control on my voice. Also I try to replicate exactly as the original song. I understand what you mean about focusing too much on the words. And about being slow. Without any accompanying music I lose track of how slow I get.
I add echo because otherwise I feel so exposed.
I understand this song had too much echo delay on it.
I am noting down all the suggestions though.
Thanks.
Re: Easy Listening - Jiss Din Se Daikha Hai Tum Ko Sanam, Bechain Rehte Hain Uss Din
I know and this criticism would work best for your future! replicating exactly the original version is the biggest mistake you do!! sing by your own :k:
Re: Easy Listening - Jiss Din Se Daikha Hai Tum Ko Sanam, Bechain Rehte Hain Uss Din
Loved it. Nice deep voice. Tough to carry slow songs. You did it.
Re: Easy Listening - Jiss Din Se Daikha Hai Tum Ko Sanam, Bechain Rehte Hain Uss Din
Thanks, again. Southie. :)
Re: Easy Listening - Jiss Din Se Daikha Hai Tum Ko Sanam, Bechain Rehte Hain Uss Din
^I think your voice will more suit for "dil main aik leher si uthhi hay abhi" try to sing that and post it here :)
Re: Easy Listening - Jiss Din Se Daikha Hai Tum Ko Sanam, Bechain Rehte Hain Uss Din
The Ghulam Ali version or the Tasawwur Khanum version ? :@:
Re: Easy Listening - Jiss Din Se Daikha Hai Tum Ko Sanam, Bechain Rehte Hain Uss Din
good try man..I agree with Southie that its very difficult to carry a low tune and the I feel like the echo is actually hurting you rather than helping here...If you think you can copy the song try it with the song itself and post..just like I do.....
Re: Easy Listening - Jiss Din Se Daikha Hai Tum Ko Sanam, Bechain Rehte Hain Uss Din
The Ghulam Ali version or the Tasawwur Khanum version ? :@:
Ghulam Ali version!!
Re: Easy Listening - Jiss Din Se Daikha Hai Tum Ko Sanam, Bechain Rehte Hain Uss Din
Phew ! 
Re: Easy Listening - Jiss Din Se Daikha Hai Tum Ko Sanam, Bechain Rehte Hain Uss Din
TS mian.. this is a good attempt.
first.. minimize the echo effect, us say mushkil hota hai samajhna.. a little is good.
2nd: you have a good voice and versatility in it.. as low pitches are very hard to reach.
3rd: you did a good job in singing.. keep it going.. and you will get more control..
in regards to loosing track.. i say tap with your hand on a table or chair or something.. to give you a rhythm. that will help with the speed.
All in all.. nice work.. do more and you will be super hit..! like...
hai love mera hit hit.. sohniyee..!! ;)
Re: Easy Listening - Jiss Din Se Daikha Hai Tum Ko Sanam, Bechain Rehte Hain Uss Din
You mean as good as you ? faints That will never happen. 
You are the tops. :k:
Thanks, bud. 
Is the ‘Aaj Purani Rahon Se’ any good ?