Dunya Ka Apna Rung..

redidentity · June 11, 2007, 6:52am

Meri Aik Chhoti Si Nazm..

Dunya Ka Apna Rung We Sa-een
Dunya Ka Apna Rung
Ker-Kay Khud Hee Aabru-Raizi
Barsa-ay Khud He Sung
Ker-Kay Khud He Pyar Ki Batain
Chheray Khud He Jung
Dunya Ka Apna Rung…!

Umeed Hai Aap Logon Ko Pasand Aye Gi..

Regards,

GuL-e-Tasbeeh · June 11, 2007, 1:30pm

Re: Dunya Ka Apna Rung..

Hmm nice...

redidentity · November 21, 2007, 11:16am

Re: Dunya Ka Apna Rung..

thnx Gul Jee.. :)

tum_bin_1 · November 21, 2007, 11:42am

Re: Dunya Ka Apna Rung..

its Wonderful Ahmer:k:

arsalanh2000 · November 21, 2007, 12:13pm

Re: Dunya Ka Apna Rung..

Cool One RED-I

redidentity · November 22, 2007, 4:40am

Re: Dunya Ka Apna Rung..

thnx alot tumbin n arsalan :)

bheegiyaad · November 22, 2007, 10:27am

Re: Dunya Ka Apna Rung..

:k:

Shab-e-Hijar · November 23, 2007, 6:37am

Re: Dunya Ka Apna Rung..

wah ahmer kya sahi baat ki hai :)… very nice :k:

redidentity · November 23, 2007, 9:13am

Re: Dunya Ka Apna Rung..

Thnx bheegi n Shab :)

Azad · November 25, 2007, 1:17pm

Re: Dunya Ka Apna Rung..

maza nahi aya

redidentity · November 26, 2007, 5:00am

Re: Dunya Ka Apna Rung..

:)

dua kejay Allah aur taaseer de..

Dushwari · November 26, 2007, 5:28am

Re: Dunya Ka Apna Rung..

nice reversal, in your poem, Ahmer.
best,
Dushwari

Azad · November 26, 2007, 5:40am

Re: Dunya Ka Apna Rung..

taseer larka hay keh larki??

redidentity · November 26, 2007, 8:59am

Re: Dunya Ka Apna Rung..

thnx Duswari :)