^^^~~~Duniya kisi k pyaar mein,jannat sey kam nahein~~~^^^

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Kehtey hein log younhi batoon batoon mein…
k duniya kisi k pyar mein jannat sey kam nahein
kabhi umeed k dairon mein goonjtti khamooshi
jannat mein doodh ki nehron si pakeeza lagti hai
kisi k dheyan ki khushboo aas paas ho to
jannat ki bad-e-naseem si lagtti hai…
uss ki zaat k sabhi subah shaam k manzar
jannat k mah o saal sey hi lagtey hein

Kehtey hein log younhi baton baton mein…
k duniya kisi k pyaar mein jannat sey kam nahein
magar aisa hota to nahein…
jannat to abadd tuk rehtti hai…
janey kyoun pyaar to pal bhar mein bikhar jata hai
log naey a jatey hein…
rahein juda ho jatti hein …
lambi raatein karwat mein hi khatam honey lagtti hein…
zindagi wasi nahein rehtti …

magar kehtey hein log younhi baton baton mein…
k duniya kisi k pyaar mein jannat sey kam nahein.

my own thinking. FIZ KHAN

Re: ^^^~~~Duniya kisi k pyaar mein,jannat sey kam nahein~~~^^^

nice thinking fiz khan

Re: ^^^~~~Duniya kisi k pyaar mein,jannat sey kam nahein~~~^^^

thanx takmeel

Re: ^^^~Duniya kisi k pyaar mein,jannat sey kam nahein~^^^

nice :k:

Re: ^^^~~~Duniya kisi k pyaar mein,jannat sey kam nahein~~~^^^

bulbul ne gul se
gul ne bahaaron se keh dia
ek chohdveen k chaand ne taaron se keh dia

u know what ?

"dunya kisi k pyar mein, jannat se kam nahi
ek dilruba hai dil mein jo hooron se kam nahi" :)

Re: ^^^~~~Duniya kisi k pyaar mein,jannat sey kam nahein~~~^^^

By the ur poem was really nice. I really like the idea. :)

Re: ^^^~Duniya kisi k pyaar mein,jannat sey kam nahein~^^^

wah, buhut khub :k:

Re: ^^^~~~Duniya kisi k pyaar mein,jannat sey kam nahein~~~^^^

buhat khoob