A Poem Which is Really Very Special For Me Atleast..
Wo Jo Mai’yon Ke Peelay Joray Main
Mummed Mummed Muskati Hai
Sukhion Ki Masti Bhari Baato’n Per
Halka Halka Sharmati Hai
Wo Jo Dhol’ki Ki Thaap Per
Dil Dil Main Gungunati Hai
Wo Jo Haatho’n Ki Mehndi Ko
Piya Ke Pyar Ka Rang Batati Hai
Najany Kaunsay Pyaray Sapnay
Apnay Dil Main Sajati Hai
Phir Soch Ker Kuch Dil Main
Sir Hulka Sa Jhatkati Hai
Wo Jo Nikaah Ke Baad
Bichhernay Ka Soch Ker Sab Ko Rulati Hai
Phir Aanay Wali Nayi Zindagi Ke
Dil Main Khuab Sajati Hai
Phir Laal Rang Ka Pehen Ker Jora
Thora Thora Itraati Hai
Wo Jo Baabul Ke Aangan Main Khel Ker
Kisi Ka Ghar Sujanay Jati Hai
Khud Bhi Thora Roti Hai
Per Sub Ko Khoob Rulati Hai
Lekin Yeh Uss Ki Kismat Hai
Baiti Paraya Dhun Kehlati Hai
Yeh Hamari Dulhan Kehlati Hai
Ahmer, this is a very good poem, except paraya dhen wording, as it is cultural and degrades women as some placemats to be strewn about as daughters who are at the mercy of good behaviors of the husbands or deceitful actions.
look what you inspired. :>
best, Dushwari
yeye dulhan bheneye bagheire,
dulhan bheni chate heye,
iss keye sath walee kursee khalee heye
iss ko pata heye,
wohh dulhan nahi semjhi jatee heye
iss keye hathoon kee mendhi
iseye kamosh unreal khavaab bhenee nazr ati heye
jiseye wohh nahi apneye naam seye mensoob
kerr sekta,
yeye mehdhi iss keye cheleye janeye ka
aks isee apneye dil keye tukroon meye dikhatee heye!
...
iseye yoon hee rheneye do
iseye tiyari her haal meye kerni atee heye...
han, sorry, yeye wohh nahi heye
but aik aur dulhan heye
yeye tumharee nahi bhen sekee
tumheye kiya iss kee kemee mhesoos hote heye?
tumheye kiya wohh yaad atee heye??
no, thanks for sharing an inspiring poem, Ahmer.
when brothers, or males, are sensitive to sisters and women
it means a lot in the way of honesty in their relationships or accorded respect to each other.
so thankyou for writing this poem and sharing it here.
