Dulha ki behan
hai kaali daain
nahi aata isay chaain
rehti hai yeh bohat bechain
phir peeti hai yeh pepsi kay can
Nahi hain ub koi bhi is kay fan
isi liye phir yehan se chali gai japan
wahan isay lag gaiya bohat bura sun tan
Re: dulha ki behan
Bibi u better contact some Pakistani rikshaw or truck wala , they might gona use yr poetry ! warna or tu kissi kaam ki nahe hai :)
Re: dulha ki behan
atleast tumhara tau itni si per bhi dimaagh nahi chalta
bibi likhti raho aisi poetry if you can
hum hain tumaray ek baray se baray fan
kuch aur batao kaun ha dulhay ki behan
usay jaan nay main sub log hain bechain
pakistani richshwaalay bhi to hain man
pasand kar laingay agar vi hai ek dain
mera ek dost hai jiska naam hai Stan
achchi khassi si uski hai apni van
mulk jis main rehta hai vo hai Pakistan
usko ab chahiyay ek khoobsoorat woman
jaanay k liyay vo tyaar even to Japan
kaali ho gori ho ya ho with sun tan
kisi ko bhi vo nahin karay ga ban
shaadi kar lay aayey ga usay wapis Pakistan
tab kitni kush hogi vo daain jaise dulhay ki behan
Re: dulha ki behan
^^ ap rkopra ke bro toh nehe:halo:
Re: dulha ki behan
aliyish ub tum hamari khidmat mein koi shair paish karo funny ya phir........ lets see how much ur stupid brain works
Re: dulha ki behan
Dulha ki behan hai kaali daain nahi aata isay chaain rehti hai yeh bohat bechain phir peeti hai yeh pepsi kay can Nahi hain ub koi bhi is kay fan isi liye phir yehan se chali gai japan wahan isay lag gaiya bohat bura sun tan
**agar kisi k kaho k ek nazm likho jismain
daain, chaain, bechain, can. fan, japan, tan k rhyme k words hon
to koee bhi nahi likh sake ga, sirf tweetybird hi lkh sake gi jo bari
creative hai.
Keep writing. You did create imagery in this poem. Just imagine an ugly, devilish, black looking younger sister of a groom, always restless and gulping down cans of pepsi...**