Dukh

Kis se bantay ga wo apni sokhta jaani ka dukh
Fasl e gul mai jisko mil jaye khizan khwani ka dukh
Din ba din, lamha ba lamha maand parhtin surkhiyan
Chah gaya chehron pe akhir dil ki veerani ka dukh
Tishna kaam ankhon mai sooraj doobta umeed ka
Tan se lipta azdahay sa chaak damaani ka dukh
Ku ba ku qurya ba qurya aabla paayi ka gham
Har taraf, had e nigah, bay sar o samani ka dukh
Ye saraab e ashnaayi,ik azaab e dar azaab
Aor har dukh se siwa hai iski arzaani ka dukh!

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acha hai!

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Din ba din, lamha ba lamha maand parhtin surkhiyan
Chah gaya chehron pe akhir dil ki veerani ka dukh

Mushkilain Itnee pariii Muj pay Kay Asshaan Ho'gaain !

Achi kawish hai :) MashAllah

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Buhat Khoob..

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Lovely Ghazal…
bohat umda treeqay say har Dukh Ko Bayaan kiya hai App nay..
Bohat he Umddaa tahreer..:k:

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ahh dukh … is ko sahnay mai bhi qudrat nay maza rakha hai … very nice ghazal :k:

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bohut khoob

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A mila khwab se khayal kahan!

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Adaab! malika e aliya! :slight_smile: (and where is my inaam :stuck_out_tongue: a malika should throw her necklace out to me right?) :slight_smile:

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Oh no. not again. another saddist? or a true lover? whatever. Its a pure feminine expression. Most of my friends couldnt even detect the essence out of it. They simply found it abstract… intangible maybe…
So if u got that, i mean what i tried to say in the poem, that is my pleasure. thanks for the appreciation anyway :slight_smile:

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Lovely....

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mirage,
diff themes here: homeless ness, helplessness, heart lessness or carelessness.
nice sharing.
best,
Dushwari

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Aor har dukh se siwa hai iski arzaani ka dukh!

Its awesome :k: