Dukh.........

Justjaju Aur Arzoo k Darmiyaan
Tishna-e-kami k hein kitnay silsalay


Ek Jabeen meri,Jhukaoon kis tarf
Na khuda sare,Khuda ban ker chale


BeQarari,Besakooni aur Khalish
Iss ne chahat k diye kesay silay


Her Qadam par Ek manzil Ek saraab
ISHQ k baqi hein kitnay Marhalay:(
** Poet(Aaina)**

Re: Dukh…

Good one Aaina jee :k:

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Very nice poem.

Sukhee rahoo

Khalid Qureshi

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:k:

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Ek Jabeen meri,Jhukaoon kis tarf

Na khuda sare,Khuda ban ker chale

Aaina g !
Ye kitaab k paaye ka kalaam likh rahi hain aap.
To phir kab aa rahi hai kitaab !?!
8-]
Aur ye she'r bhi aap hi ka hai kya? Bohat Zabardast hai ;
Shaid Koi Khawaish Roti Rehti Hai
Mere Inder Barish Hoti Rehti Hai

Re: Dukh.........

Khushrang Aainadar....khushbash,

Apka qalam sachha aur masoom hai....
agar aap newyork main hain....to Humaira Rahman jaisi
shaira se contact karen...she will be an asset for your guidence.
goodluck.

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Booooooooohat omda
jeeti raho
shan

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Wahh!!

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Thanks all :) ...........................zamil signature par likha shair mera nahi hai na he mein ye janti hoon k ye kis poet ka hai but ye mujay bohat pasand tha iss liye meine likha.........bohat sukriya zamil i wish k mein kitab k paye ki poetry ker sakoon ..anyway inshaAllah one day!!!! Aaina