DuaooN Se Bhi Taqdeer Badaltee Nahi

ghazal_kisi_ke · February 11, 2003, 4:31am

DuaooN se bhi taqdeer badaltee nahi
kahtan hai zindagee aur jaan bhi nikaltee nahi
mera asab tak ko fana kar dete hain
yeh qiamat sub-e-hejr ke jo taltee nahi
hath cohta jub se kese hamnawa ka
gar ke tab se mein samhaltee nahi
koi umeed milan ke ho to hath utaoon
ke aas ke koi sama bhi jaltee nahi
ghum mujheko jene ka hosla detay hain
ghum se nebah kar ke ab mein bohjtee nahi

Aa tanhayee!!
agar to mera sath na hotee
to…
mein ketne tanha hotee

Khudija Mir

Dilsay · February 11, 2003, 5:13am

Very nice....

This is what i needed right now thanks a lot for sharing it....

chand_chehra · February 11, 2003, 7:25am

:k:

HeArT_HaCKeR · February 11, 2003, 11:20am

:) nice one :)

Philanthrope · February 11, 2003, 11:36am

wah…awsome :k:

udaasaankhein · February 11, 2003, 12:00pm

very nice....

how come most of the guppies at the poetry section are heart brokn. :(

GuL-e-Tasbeeh · February 11, 2003, 12:54pm

Nice one Gkk:)

system · February 11, 2003, 1:07pm

Nice one :k::k:

Capricorn · February 11, 2003, 1:24pm

:k:

Bhooli_Bisri · February 11, 2003, 6:00pm

sis bahut lajvab kavish hai apke
udaasankhain: apka apne bare mein kya khayal hai apke tu ankhain tak udas hain

Azad · February 12, 2003, 4:19am

[QUOTE]
*Originally posted by udaasaankhein: *
very nice....

how come most of the guppies at the poetry section are heart brokn. :(
[/QUOTE]

Woh kuch iss liay bhi key poetry section "Dilsay" zara vakrii type ka hay

Paglee · February 12, 2003, 12:04pm

Re: DuaooN Se Bhi Taqdee Badaltee Nahi

[QUOTE]
Originally posted by ghazal kisi ke: *
DuaooN se bhi taqdeer badaltee nahi
kahtan hai zindagee aur jaan bhi nikaltee nahi
mera asab tak ko fana kar dete hain
yeh qiamat sub-e-hejr ke jo taltee nahi
**hath cohta jub se kese hamnawa ka
gar ke tab se mein samhaltee nahi*
koi umeed milan ke ho to hath utaoon
ke aas ke koi sama bhi jaltee nahi
ghum mujheko jene ka hosla detay hain
ghum se nebah kar ke ab mein bohjtee nahi

Aa tanhayee!!
agar to mera sath na hotee
to..........
mein ketne tanha hotee

[/QUOTE]

bohat khub Gkk..thanks 4 sharin..:)

Dilsay · February 13, 2003, 4:43am

2K mubarak....

Wasay maray 2K aap say pahlay howay thay..... :(

udaasaankhein · February 13, 2003, 8:16am

[QUOTE]
*Originally posted by udaasaankhein: *
very nice....

how come most of the guppies at the poetry section are heart brokn. :(
[/QUOTE]

aankhein udaas hain to kia hoa. laboon per to muskaan hai. :)

Capricorn · February 13, 2003, 9:12am

Deadly combo

Capricorn · February 13, 2003, 9:14am

Thats why we are in poetry section na :halo:

udaasaankhein · February 13, 2003, 4:59pm

yaani ke only sad ppl like or do poetry?

ghazal_kisi_ke · February 14, 2003, 4:38am

Dilsay , chand_chehra , HeArT HeCKeR , P}{amacist , udassaankhein , Gul_e_Tasbeeh , Vavicous , Capricorn , Boohli bisri , Paglee pasand karne ka bohut bohut shukria:flower1:

Dilsay thanks:) i’m sorry but late conratzzzzz of ur 2K:flower1:
Azad dilsay vakhrii type ka nahi hai:)
udaasaankhein kuch aisa he samhaj lo:)