Dua ya Bad-dua

[muqawwee123]

Kash mera naseeb kuch yun ho jae
mere kafan se teri zulfon ki khushboo aae

Read this line in a book. It was in prose, but the thought was poetic… so converted it to poetry?

Kiya ye koi dua hai? ya jeene walon ko marne walon ki badp-dua?

[Microbian]

Aik bay zarar si khuwahish

[OYMWA]

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Reminds me of another shair, where shayer's intention is misread:

Ek nukthe ne hume, mehram se mujrim bana diya
Hum dua likhte rahe, woh daghaa padthe rahe

[muqawwee123]

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@Microbian

Aik bay zarar si khuwahish

khwahish poori ho jae to nuqsan kis ka hoga?

[muqawwee123]

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@OneYourMomWarnedAbt

Reminds me of another shair, where shayer's intention is misread:

Ek nukthe ne hume, mehram se mujrim bana diya Hum dua likhte rahe, woh daghaa padthe rahe

matlab marne wale jeene walon ko dagha de jate hain?

[Microbian]

@muqawwee123:10052152

khwahish poori ho jae to nuqsan kis ka hoga?

Bay zarar khwahish me kaisa nuqsan?

[OYMWA]

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@muqawwee123

matlab marne wale jeene walon ko dagha de jate hain?

Don't think so, its a play on words. Mehram and Murjim, Dua and daghaa both differ only by a nukhta.

[Diva]

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Blasphemy :D

[muqawwee123]

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@Diva

Blasphemy :D

kiyun kafan to log barson rakh lete hain apne paas.. uss main to kisi ki bhi khushboo bas sakti hai

[Diva]

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Meraty waqt tou Allaah ko yaad kerlay banda :/

[Howzat_1]

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@muqawwee123

Kash mera naseeb kuch yun ho jae
mere kafan se teri zulfon ki khushboo aae

Read this line in a book. It was in prose, but the thought was poetic… so converted it to poetry?

Kiya ye koi dua hai? ya jeene walon ko marne walon ki badp-dua?

yah lafz pahli dafa suna hay main nay badp or its Nain / Jiia syndrome

[muqawwee123]

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@Howzat

yah lafz pahli dafa suna hay main nay badp or its Nain / Jiia syndrome

Anything on the topic Mr Moderator?

[Howzat_1]

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First Clear this thing then I’ll go further Mr. CM

[muqawwee123]

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@Howzat

First Clear this thing then I’ll go further Mr. CM

Title main jo likha hai wo hatmi hai.. don’t try to act Mubasshar Luqman

[Howzat_1]

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@muqawwee123

Kash mera naseeb kuch yun ho jae
mere kafan se teri zulfon ki khushboo aae

Read this line in a book. It was in prose, but the thought was poetic… so converted it to poetry?

Kiya ye koi dua hai? ya jeene walon ko marne walon ki badp-dua?

Yah dua hay na bud dua, sirf aik khawahish hay… Shayad likhnay walla ka khiyal ho kah uss key mahbooba darzan hay aur uss ka kafan siye warnah kafan main uss say lipat kar to dafan honay say rahi

[Howzat_1]

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@muqawwee123

Title main jo likha hai wo hatmi hai.. don’t try to act Mubasshar Luqman

Please Mubashir Luqman iss Sadi ka sub say sacha anchor hay aur yah sub Geo waloon key sazish hay apna thora sa nuqsan karwa kar ARY aur Mubashir Luqman ko ban kar wa dia

[Howzat_1]

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@muqawwee123

Title main jo likha hai wo hatmi hai.. don’t try to act Mubasshar Luqman

waisay yah PA naheen hay kah apni koi ghalti mananai he naheen hay

[muqawwee123]

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Topic pe baat karen

[Howzat_1]

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@Howzat

Yah dua hay na bud dua, sirf aik khawahish hay… Shayad likhnay walla ka khiyal ho kah uss key mahbooba darzan hay aur uss ka kafan siye warnah kafan main uss say lipat kar to dafan honay say rahi

@muqawwee123

Topic pe baat karen

Yah opar kia key hay