dua kisi ke liye

Meray luboun pey sajji hai Dua kisi key Liye
Meray Khuda mujhe hansna sikha kisi key Liye

Mujhe yaqeen hai yeh mujh sey na hoo sakey ga magar
Mein ker raha houn kisi sey wafa kisi key Liye

Nahin milounga agar khoo diya to ney
Na apney haath sey gawa mujhe kisi key Liye

Meray janoon ko to yeh baat bhi ganwara hai
Meray Liye na sahi phir bhi Aaa kisi key Liye

Mein saath saath houn uss key baadbaan ki tarah
Meray Khuda meri sansein barha kisi key liye…

Re: dua kisi ke liye

Very Nice… Its Very good… :flower1:

Two Ash’ar Jin ke First Misray Need some Changes..

  1. Nahin milounga agar khoo diya to ney

Its not in the Same Rhyme as other Verses… If You could Change it to…
e.g. NahiN miloonga agar hum ko kho dia tum ne
OR.. **NaheeN miloNga agar Tum ne kho dia hum **ko .. Tou iss maiN Rawani Ajayegi.

  1. Mein saath saath houn uss key baadbaan ki tarah
    Here… Badan is Blocking the Continuity … U can Either Change it or Put or Remove some words…
    e.g. MaiN Saath saath houN usske HaseeN badan ki Tarha
    Meray Khuda meri sansein barha kisi key liye

Re: dua kisi ke liye

Boht khoob frozenfire… :flower1:

keep it up:)