Hands are holding ash
Ash of burnt dreams
They are very cruel
How they are mean
Palms are trembling
Lips are dry
Eyes have tearS
Voice is sigh
Hundered years passed
To hold this ash
No phoenix came
It remained the ash…
daaghu1::
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oh its cool ...... aik she'r yaad aagia ...
Khawab Hotay Hain Daikhnay Kay Liye
Magar Inn Main Ja Kar Mat Raha Karo!
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thanx mr.romeo & sannan, Sannan boht acha sher hai thank u.
:coolios:
Sanan Love u yar kia bat hay tumhari
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Hands are holding ash
Ash of burnt dreams
very touchy a sha'r just popped in ...
Sunna Hay Hath Main Taqdeer Howa Karti Hay
Kal younhi Hath par Ek Naam Likha Dair Talk
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Hi Shazia. Another quite a startling attempt. Very good indeed, though i get the impression, the grammatical structure could have been a bit better with this one, well, just my thought.
Cheers. :)
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u might b right bt i wrote this poem in first year, at the time i was nt v gud in grammar bt any how thanx 4 the criticism C.F.