Dosti ka ek samandar

WiseGuy · March 15, 2003, 5:56pm

Dosti ka ek samandar Unginat saahil wafa kay Apnay seenay maiN chupaye Jaanay kab say beh raha tha Daf'atun ek mauj ubhree MotiyoN kee shakal maiN Dhaltay huay alfaaz, jumlay Khood-bakhood dil say uThay Lub tak gaye Dil ka her ek bojh lafzoN nay uThaya Fikr ka her lamha ek jumlay say Takraya Bhikher ker kho gaya Gham ka raiza raiza Kuch baatoN ki ro maiN beh gaya

Dilsay · March 15, 2003, 6:03pm

Well said....

chand_chehra · March 15, 2003, 7:34pm

Nice..

ullujii · March 15, 2003, 7:46pm

bohoot allaa :k:

Paglee · March 15, 2003, 9:36pm

Re: Dosti ka ek samandar

[QUOTE]
*Originally posted by WiseGuy: *

Dosti ka ek samandar
Unginat saahil wafa kay
Apnay seenay maiN chupaye
Jaanay kab say beh raha tha
Daf'atun ek mauj ubhree
MotiyoN kee shakal maiN
Dhaltay huay alfaaz, jumlay
Khood-bakhood dil say uThay
Lub tak gaye
Dil ka her ek bojh lafzoN nay uThaya
Fikr ka her lamha ek jumlay say Takraya
Bhikher ker kho gaya
Gham ka raiza raiza
Kuch baatoN ki ro maiN beh gaya

[/QUOTE]

very nice thanks 4 sharin Wg..:)

BrokenSky · March 15, 2003, 9:47pm

:)

ghazal_kisi_ke · March 16, 2003, 4:14am

bohtu khoob:k::k:
thanks:~)

Swera · March 16, 2003, 6:50am

Kuch baatoN ki ro maiN beh gaya

very nice:)
Thnkx 4 sharing it

WiseGuy · March 16, 2003, 8:30pm

Thanks Dilsay, Chando, ullujii, Paglee, BrokenSky, ghazal kisi ke, Swera :) :) :)

BrokenSky · March 16, 2003, 9:18pm

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*Originally posted by WiseGuy: *
Thanks Dilsay, Chando, ullujii, Paglee, BrokenSky, ghazal kisi ke, Swera :) :) :)
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always Welkum but on ur Kharcha Paani:p

Mirza_Ruswa · March 17, 2003, 7:29am

Re: Dosti ka ek samandar

[QUOTE]
*Originally posted by WiseGuy: *

Dosti ka ek samandar
Unginat saahil wafa kay
Apnay seenay maiN chupaye
Jaanay kab say beh raha tha
Daf'atun ek mauj ubhree
MotiyoN kee shakal maiN
Dhaltay huay alfaaz, jumlay
Khood-bakhood dil say uThay
Lub tak gaye
Dil ka her ek bojh lafzoN nay uThaya
Fikr ka her lamha ek jumlay say Takraya
Bhikher ker kho gaya
Gham ka raiza raiza
Kuch baatoN ki ro maiN beh gaya

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Mohtaram mohtaram

aisay teer to na chalaa-iayay jo jigar paar bhi na hon aur khalish e abadi ban jayaiN
kiyaa rawani hai - kiya markazi khayal hai - aur kiya lafzon ka haseen tareen imtezaaj hai.

Saheb e nazm ko daad o tahseen pahonchay
aur Hum tak pahonchanay waloN ko Shukriyaa

Salaam
Sham (Mirza Ruswa)

Philanthrope · March 17, 2003, 7:33am

Re: Dosti ka ek samandar

[QUOTE]
*Originally posted by WiseGuy: *

Dosti ka ek samandar
Unginat saahil wafa kay
Apnay seenay maiN chupaye
Jaanay kab say beh raha tha
Daf'atun ek mauj ubhree
MotiyoN kee shakal maiN
Dhaltay huay alfaaz, jumlay
Khood-bakhood dil say uThay
Lub tak gaye
Dil ka her ek bojh lafzoN nay uThaya
Fikr ka her lamha ek jumlay say Takraya
Bhikher ker kho gaya
Gham ka raiza raiza
Kuch baatoN ki ro maiN beh gaya

[/QUOTE]
Ever Green and Ever Great!.. This is by Anwar Maqsood na... One of my fav..
Thanks for sharing..