Dost miltaiN......

Swera · September 29, 2003, 1:24pm

Dost miltaiN haiN bichaRnay kay liya Phool khiltaiN haiN bikharanay kay liya AshiaN bantaiN ojaRnay kay liya Ab samjj aya ya duniaN kiya hay Ab samjj aya ya duniaN kiya hay ik obal tha Ik janooN tha mery jisam maiN garam khooN tha socha kooch nahiN bas nikal gaiya apnai agg maIN khood hi jaal gaiya apnai agg maIN khood hi jaal gaiya Dhoop chaRti hay utar jati hay Moujj sahil sahil maiN thehar jati hay baat bhi hud sya guzar jati hay Ab samjj aya ya duniaN kiya hay Ab samjj aya ya duniaN kiya hay Haar taraf yahaN mout hay rawan zindhagi mujay lai hay kahan Dekha aina jo maiN daar gaiya jenay kay liya kitna maiN maar gaiya Jeenay waqat jadu hay ya chall jata hay dhoop ka raang bhi dhul jata hay tub ya loha bhi pigha jata hay ab samj aya ya duniyan hay Ab samjj aya ya duniyaN kiya hay DuniyaN kiya hay............

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Amarbail1 · September 29, 2003, 1:39pm

Re: Dost miltaiN…

*Originally posted by Swera: *
[thumb=D]whoiteflower.JPG[/thumb] Dost miltaiN haiN bichaRnay kay liya Phool khiltaiN haiN bikharanay kay liya AshiaN bantaiN ojaRnay kay liya Ab samjj aya ya duniaN kiya hay Ab samjj aya ya duniaN kiya hay ik obal tha Ik janooN tha mery jisam maiN garam khooN tha socha kooch nahiN bas nikal gaiya apnai agg maIN khood hi jaal gaiya apnai agg maIN khood hi jaal gaiya Dhoop chaRti hay utar jati hay Moujj sahil sahil maiN thehar jati hay baat bhi hud sya guzar jati hay Ab samjj aya ya duniaN kiya hay Ab samjj aya ya duniaN kiya hay Haar taraf yahaN mout hay rawan zindhagi mujay lai hay kahan Dekha aina jo maiN daar gaiya jenay kay liya kitna maiN maar gaiya Jeenay waqat jadu hay ya chall jata hay dhoop ka raang bhi dhul jata hay tub ya loha bhi pigha jata hay ab samj aya ya duniyan hay Ab samjj aya ya duniyaN kiya hay DuniyaN kiya hay............

Xcellent ... :k: thanks for sharing **Subha**

WiseGuy · September 29, 2003, 1:53pm

Ab samjj aya ya duniaN kiya hay
Ab samjj aya ya duniaN kiya hay

Chalo shuker samajh tu aaya :)

Nice work Swera je.
Thank you for sharing... :)

Swera · September 29, 2003, 1:59pm

[QUOTE]
*Originally posted by WiseGuy: *
Ab samjj aya ya duniaN kiya hay
Ab samjj aya ya duniaN kiya hay

Chalo shuker samajh tu aaya :)

Nice work Swera je.
Thank you for sharing... :)
[/QUOTE]

Ji..so, now ap ko samjanay ai na:p

Thanks....& it was my pleaseure:)

Swera · September 29, 2003, 2:00pm

Re: Re: Dost miltaiN…

Thank u…

u r welcome…

Daagh · September 29, 2003, 9:30pm

very nice Swera jee

Dekha aina jo maiN daar gaiya
jenay kay liya kitna maiN maar gaiya

bahot khoob

KhanFarhad · September 30, 2003, 12:28am

Wah kya baat hai........

ghazal_kisi_ke · September 30, 2003, 3:01am

Dost miltaiN haiN bichaRnay kay liya
Phool khiltaiN haiN bikharanay kay liya
AshiaN bantaiN ojaRnay kay liya
Ab samjj aya ya duniaN kiya hay
:k: :k: :k:
thanx!

Dilsay · September 30, 2003, 3:33am

Very nice....

Swera · September 30, 2003, 12:46pm

Thank you…

KhanFarhad Shukriya bohat bohat..

ghazal kisi ke Thankxxxx sis…

**Dilsay ** Thank you, too.

Thanksssssss All of u!

Lamhay · September 30, 2003, 4:32pm

wah bahut khoob!

Swera · October 1, 2003, 12:40pm

[QUOTE]
*Originally posted by Lamhay: *
wah bahut khoob!
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shukrita...

WiseGuy · October 1, 2003, 1:17pm

Shukrita??? What language is this

Swera · October 1, 2003, 1:28pm

I meant…shukriya…

WiseGuy · October 1, 2003, 3:25pm

For a moment I was thinking may be you are speaking Turkish.

Diva · October 1, 2003, 3:37pm

Wah wah S keep it up :D

MANAN · October 1, 2003, 4:31pm

beautiful:flower2:

Muslim_Queen · October 1, 2003, 7:19pm

Beautiful poem. I liked it so much ,Im keeping parts of it for my msn nick. thank you so much for sharing.

Swera · October 2, 2003, 12:25pm

Something made you laugh…that’s enought 4 me…

Say whatever you want…

Turkish or purkish…

Swera · October 2, 2003, 12:27pm

Which part? That’s nice… My pleasure…
& yes, Thanks…

Oh! It’s a song ji…