Doori Ka Ehsaas

Arts & Culture Poetry ( Intikhaab & Sho'ra-e-Gupshup)
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Salam all,

I’ve been reading here from time to time. Thought I should contribute a little as well. My Urdu in neither good nor complicated with difficult words. Please correct any grammatical mistakes. Also forgive any “un-poeticness”. And appreciate if you like. :slight_smile:

Here it goes:

– Doori Ka Ehsaas –

Doori ka ehsaas humein sari raat jagata raha

Kabhi tum door the
Kabhi hum
Faasla tha, magar
Qurbat ka ehsas tha
Ab tum mere paas ho
Main tere
Sangat hai, magar
Doori ka ehsaas hai
Jau humein sari raat jagata raha

Kabhi hum chup rehte the
Kabhi tum
Khamoshi thi, magar
Guftgoo ka ehsas tha
Ab kabhi tum bolte ho
Kabhi hum
Baatein hain, magar
Doori ka ehsaas hai
Jau humein sari raat jagata raha

Doori ka ehsaas humein sari raat jagata raha

Thanks for reading.