Door tak soch meiN ik khalaa hey ajab...

Amal · April 27, 2011, 2:43pm

**Door tak soch meiN ik khalaa hey ajab
be’basi ka naya marhala hey ajab

hosh ke dosh par sar jhuka ke chalo
be’khudi dosto ik balaa hey ajab

manchaloN ney taraashey sanam ja’baja
silsila chaahatoN ka chala hey ajab

khaak urrti rahi aaNkh meiN raat bhar
khaab meiN is dafa kuch jala hey ajab

harkateiN, aadateiN aam heiN sab meri
sarkashi ka magar hosla hey ajab

kar gaya wo faqat aaNkh sey guftugu
bheid mujh par sadaa ka khula hey ajab

aab khud dhooNdta phir raha hey mujhey
imtehaaN dasht meiN kuch mila hey ajab

har Amal ka sila tey’shuda hey yahaN
bas wafa ka zara silsila hey ajab

**By: Amal

_Masoom_Muskaan · April 27, 2011, 3:06pm

Re: Door tak soch meiN ik khalaa hey ajab...

very nice bhai :)

UZ · April 28, 2011, 5:23am

Re: Door tak soch meiN ik khalaa hey ajab…

number 2,4 and last one are really nice ashaar :k: And rest of the ghazal is very nice too :k:

Shazia_Arif · April 28, 2011, 7:14am

Re: Door tak soch meiN ik khalaa hey ajab...

v nice.

fara · April 28, 2011, 12:27pm

Re: Door tak soch meiN ik khalaa hey ajab...

Kiya baat hay Amal... Aisay aisay gohar-e-nayaab baramad hu rahay hain aapki shairi ki pitari say...

Very well written. I especially liked these

Innocent_Smile · April 28, 2011, 2:44pm

Re: Door tak soch meiN ik khalaa hey ajab…

boht khob…zabardast…lajawab…umdah…:k:

sfaseehrabbani · April 29, 2011, 5:23pm

Re: Door tak soch meiN ik khalaa hey ajab...

Bohat Khoob Amal bhai!
bohat achhi ghazal kahi hae aap ne,
bohat si daad aap ke liay.

Amal · April 29, 2011, 7:34pm

Re: Door tak soch meiN ik khalaa hey ajab...

Barri navazish Faseeh bhai ... pasandeedgi ke leeye bohat shukriya :)

waleedhbk · April 29, 2011, 7:34pm

Re: Door tak soch meiN ik khalaa hey ajab…

Umdah :k:

Apki to baat he kiya hai Amal bhai

Amal · April 29, 2011, 7:37pm

Re: Door tak soch meiN ik khalaa hey ajab…

Pasandeedgi aur pazeeraai ke leeye aap sab ehbaab ka be’had shukriya

Amal · April 29, 2011, 7:38pm

Re: Door tak soch meiN ik khalaa hey ajab...

Good to see you back fara ji :) ... Ghazal pasand karne ke leeye shukriya :)

GuL-e-Tasbeeh · May 5, 2011, 3:08pm

Re: Door tak soch meiN ik khalaa hey ajab…

**wah.. bohat khoob likha hai Amal.. kiya kahnay.. bohat dilkash.. :k:

deir say comment karnay pe ma’zrat khwah hooN.. aaj hi nazar say guzri hai.. Umeed hay aap yooN hi likhtay rahaiN ge..

**

Amal · May 5, 2011, 3:13pm

Re: Door tak soch meiN ik khalaa hey ajab...

meiN to yuNhi likhta rahooN ga....lekin umeed hey aap yuNhi "deir" nahi karti raheiN gi :)

pasandeedgi ke leeye shukriya :)

sarmad786 · May 5, 2011, 4:58pm

Re: Door tak soch meiN ik khalaa hey ajab...

v v v nice ideed ... parhne ka bahut maza aya ... :)