--Door kahiN--

GuL-e-Tasbeeh · February 25, 2007, 12:33pm

Door kahiN weerneiN meiN
shab ki iss khamoshi meiN
nanha saa ik taara toota
merey dil par chot lagi
aur guzrii huwii baateiN yaad aaiN
aesii hi ik raat thii wuh bhii
jis meiN meraa masoom mujhsey
bichar geyaa thaa issi tarha sey
jaesey ye masoom saa taraa
toot geyaa aur khoh bhi geyaa
Door kahiN weerneiN meiN
nanha saa ik taara toota

fara · February 25, 2007, 12:37pm

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Awww... What a special thought!

deadsoul · February 25, 2007, 1:16pm

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nice one

Gondal_007 · February 25, 2007, 1:30pm

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Nice

Koyal · February 25, 2007, 4:29pm

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one of ma fav thanks for sharing Gul :)

_Masoom_Muskaan · February 25, 2007, 8:56pm

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v nice gul:)

Shab-e-Hijar · February 25, 2007, 10:44pm

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Nice but wassup with the codes:konfused:

Mysterious_Woman · February 26, 2007, 2:20pm

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aww, nice...

moonmine · February 26, 2007, 8:06pm

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very very nice...

Amal · February 27, 2007, 4:37pm

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Bohat pur-asraar nazm hey. Has a very nice theme :k: Thanx Gul for bringing it for us

hiba_no.1 · February 27, 2007, 5:00pm

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good one

Dada_Abbaa · March 1, 2007, 7:40am

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touchy n sad ...

Thanks Pakeeza for sharing ... :-)

Diva · March 1, 2007, 4:01pm

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Tara Aapka Kya Laga?!?!

GuL-e-Tasbeeh · March 2, 2007, 10:47am

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thanks guys for liking it, shaair ka kuch bhala ho geya hoga:-)

Precious_Khan · March 2, 2007, 10:56am

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Nice sharing :~)