ikk roshan si lao ubhri thi
per kya ubhri thi door bohat
manzil ka taa-yun tha mujh ko
per pa pyada or door bohat
na mila mujh ko rafeeq-e-safar
bas tanha safar or door bohat
tum laott ke ab na ao gay
mai tum ko dhoondti rehti hoon
meri aankhain bojhal bojhal si
ya tum thehre kuch door bohat
kabhi mere hath main hath to do
main tum ko sagar dikhlaon
or mojain mujh si pagal si
sahil se door or door bohat
kabhi halka sa malal tha
keh mene tum ko kho dia
ab dil ko ddharas ddharas hai
ikk aas bhi thehri door bohat…
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v nice .......bht achi .... i like ur poetry alotttttttttt.......tooo goooddddddddd...
mai haath to day daita .. but u k hath ganday hain ....wink...hehe
Re: DOOR BOHAT…
bht nice:lajawab:
thanx 2 likin,wese mene apko hath diya b nai tha ap ne khud he tharkiun ki tara pakarr lia:barbie:
Re: DOOR BOHAT...
thanx punjabi kurri.
hehe… jee nhi tum nay khud kha tha k mera haathoo ki lakiryooo ko parhoo …jhootiiiii …samii onnchii onnchiii crying
Re: DOOR BOHAT…
Very good :k:
Re: DOOR BOHAT…
Nice Poetry .. If You Really Wanna Know Where Feelings Are Hidden,Knock The Door Of Shazia !!!
Re: DOOR BOHAT...
thanx Faris.
i admit b.m u hve beauty in ur eyes tht's y c beauty every where.thanx 4 likin.
i admit b.m u hve beauty in ur eyes tht's y c beauty every where.thanx 4 likin.
What Can I Say About My Eyes........ I Am Been Conned Since The Day I Started Beliving That Beauty Is Mysterious Cheat !!!!!!!! I Hope You Are Not That One Of Those Cheat With Marvellous Beauty To Despair !!!!!!
What Can I Say About My Eyes........ I Am Been Conned Since The Day I Started Beliving That Beauty Is Mysterious Cheat !!!!!!!! I Hope You Are Not That One Of Those Cheat With Marvellous Beauty To Despair !!!!!!
no b.m u can't deny the fact beauty is beuty nt a mysterious cheat.jst feel it by heart n u cn c it every where.
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Lolz If I Just Feel The Beauty Then Their Shall Not Left Any Word To Discribe It........... Take It As A Artist Of Beauty Tracer Who Gets Cheated Coz Of Mysterious Beauty.Every Min You See Their Shall Be An Different View,Just Two Eyes What Can Do .......... Glorify And Pacific That.. Yes This is End Of Search ....... But That End Shall Be Only When We Die !!!!!!! Till That Moment Every Day Every Min Different Aspect Of Discribeing Beauty !!!
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very touchy and sensitive feelings ....... really nice
very touchy and sensitive feelings ....... really nice
thanx.