doo batain... written by me...:)

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agar aap cycle challian gay to 2 battain hoon gee yaa to aap taiz cycle challian gay yaa aahista challian gay
. agar aap aahista challian gay to koe baat nahien laiken agar aap taiz challian gay to 2 battain hoon gee..
yaa to aap girr jaaian gay yaa nahien girrain gay.. agar naa girray to koe baat nahien laiken agar aap
girr gaaiay to 2 battain hoon gee , ya to aap ko chottain aaian gee yaa nahien aaian gee.. agar nahien
aaeen to koe baat nahien laiken agar chottain aa gaeen to 2 battain hoon gee yaa to marham patti kay
liay hospital jaaian gay yaa nahien jaaian gay.. agar naa gaaiay to theek hai aur agar challay gaaiy to 2
battain hoon gee … yaa to aap ko marham patti karr keh farigh karr diya jaaiay gaa yaa dakhil karr liya
jaaiay gaa.. agar farigh karr diya to theek hai laikeh agar dakhil karr liya to 2 battain hoon gee .. yaa to
aap ko operation hoo gaa yaa nahien hoo gaa.. agar naa hoa too theek hai aur agar hoo gaya to 2 battain
hoon gee … yaa to aap bach jaaian gay yaa nahien bachain gay… agar bach gaaiay to theek hai warna 2
battain hoon gee yaa to aap jahanum main jaaian gay yaa jannat main … iss liay cycle challanay say pehlay
yeh soch lain keh aap jannat main jana chahaty hain yaa jahanum main…
(2 battain… akif zeb 22 june 1998)

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cute

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thanks jee.. aap ko passand aaya…

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it was not that bad.. parh to liya hota jee kisse nay ...

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good1…i liked it

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Kia Baat Hain … Nice …

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Scorpian King

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good one akif bhai

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hmmmmmm yaad nahi kab or kaha parha thaa lakin main kahi yay perh chuki hooN

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i didnt like and it sucked... (actually i havent read it ...)

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jee it has been printed in daily jang

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chotti motii cheezain maire bhee print hoo jate hain…

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was'nt "do batain" the title of preface for ibn-e-safi novels or some other pakistani writer?

interesting article though, congrats on being published. Now we can add one more name to the list of published writers on GS

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lol funnny

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lagta hai apki cycle ka paiya har waqt ghoomta rehta hai

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thanks jee

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aap ke nawzish hai..
zarra nawazi hai aap kee

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mairay dill mairay mussafir

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aapki do baato’N mein thori rado badal ki zaroorat hai yaar akif zeb.
wo jab aap kehte ho ke aap jab cycle tez chalo ge to do baatein hongi yaa to aap gir jaaeinge aur yaa to nahee girein ge ab yehaa’n per yoon kahiye ke aap jab cycle tez chalaaeinge to do baatein hongi eik to yeh ke ho saktaa hai aap gir jaaien aur doosri yeh ke agar na gire to jaldi ghaR po’ch jein ge, gaR jaldi ghar poonch ge to maa’n baap se daant kam paRhe gi aur saath mein poultion saans kam lo ge. kiyo’N

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wAfaa sho_haaR kahee hain koi hasEE’n bhi to ho*^*
chalo phiR aaj uSsi be_wAfaa kii baat kareiN**^

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very nice i liked it alot(eventhough i didn't read it all, but i don't like to read long things)
anyway what i read was very good

Junooni se
aur Sabz se
milti hai
Sabz_Junooni

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shukriya sabz janooni.. aur mareezay ishq iss kaa next time khayal rakhon ga..

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aab jo cheez next time likhon gaa woh koshish kaorn gaa keh aap kay mayyar par puri utray waisya thanks for the reply…

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