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Arts & Culture Poetry ( Intikhaab & Sho'ra-e-Gupshup)
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a couple of ash’aar from my latest ghazal…

will post the whole ghazal in the next couple of days

umeed kam hai kariN kabhi manzil pay jaa warood
ghalib jo niklay aap say rahnuma kay saath

talluq kay bawjood hai hum pai, mashq-e-sitam mudaam
shewa tera kaya ho ga na-aashnaa kay saath

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wah wah wah wah wah wah wah wah wah wah wah wah wah

:halo:

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does that mean u dint get any of it?

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wat do u think :blush:

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i think wot i said in the last post was true :frusty2:

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:smiley: **ghalib jo niklay aap say rahnuma kay saath :smiley:
**

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^ ye daad hai ya thatha hai :aq:

~*~ Aap ki Pasand ~*~
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aesi shairi par thatha expect karain to zaydah behtar ho ga :D

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^ :teary1:

dil totay totay ho gaya…

par hum phir bhi poori post karny jaa rahy hain :barbie:

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hum nay un ki yaad may ro ro kay tub bhar diyay
woh aay nahain aur chal diyay :clown:
chacha i was kidding app ki shairi to itni haseen hoti hay kay meray sur kay ooper say kab guzarti hay pata bhi nahee chalta par hoti bohat achi hay :slight_smile:

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^ :hehe:

and i was being sarcastic…