do lafz is zubaaN sey jo keh paoN, to sakooN paoN ..

Arts & Culture Poetry ( Intikhaab & Sho'ra-e-Gupshup)

Azam_1 January 29, 2003, 4:38pm 1

** do lafz is zubaaN sey jo keh paoN, to sakooN paoN .. apni Ana ko dafn maiN kar paoN, to sakooN paoN ..

karta raha he mujh pe hakoomat mera zameer ..
is zulm-e-musalsal se nikal paoN, to sakooN paoN ..

dars-e-wafa ka boojh mere shaanoN pe dhara he ..
is baar ko kaaandhoN se hata paoN, to sakooN paoN ..

ankhoN ki nami mujh se chura le gaya koi ..
qatraey kisi se maang ke laaoN, to baha paoN ..

sargoshiyaaN pheli hain, ab har simt jahaN maiN ..
aye kaash ke is shor ki had se maiN nikal jaoN ..

khamooshiyaN, tanhaayaaN or apni zaat hoo ..
in mehfilooN se door, kahin doooor chala jaoN ..

safar-e-hayaat le chala he mujh ko baha ke ..
do pal ko tehar jaoN, to kuch hosla bhi paoN ..

meri nazar se guzre hain kitne hi mekadey ..
masjid se nikal paoN, to onki taraf bhi jaoN ..

kehtey hain yaar, pee ley! bas ik ghoont hi pee ley ..
darta hoon kaheen, apni nazar sey na main gir jaoN ..

is zindagi main dost mile hain bohot mujhe ..
hamzaad garr ik dhoondhna chahooN, to kidhar jaoN? ..

nafrat si bass gai hay ab qalb-o-dimagh main ..
aisa na ho ke aag main, apni hi main jal jaoN ..

har shaks mujhe dekh kar ibrat ka sabaq le ..
main naqash aise choor kar, duniya se guzar jaoN ..

By Me.
**

Dilsay January 29, 2003, 4:54pm 2

Very nice

lost_soul January 29, 2003, 5:15pm 3

Very Nice Azam, :) .

chand_chehra January 29, 2003, 5:40pm 4

very nice :k: keep it up

HeArT_HaCKeR January 29, 2003, 7:55pm 5

Re: do lafz is zubaaN sey jo keh paoN, to sakooN paoN ..

[QUOTE]
Originally posted by Azam#1: *

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do lafz is zubaaN sey jo keh paoN, to sakooN paoN ..
apni Ana ko dafn maiN kar paoN, to sakooN paoN ..

karta raha he mujh pe hakoomat mera zameer ..
is zulm-e-musalsal se nikal paoN, to sakooN paoN ..

dars-e-wafa ka boojh mere shaanoN pe dhara he ..
is baar ko kaaandhoN se hata paoN, to sakooN paoN ..

ankhoN ki nami mujh se chura le gaya koi ..
qatraey kisi se maang ke laaoN, to baha paoN ..

sargoshiyaaN pheli hain, ab har simt jahaN maiN ..
aye kaash ke is shor ki had se maiN nikal jaoN ..

khamooshiyaN, tanhaayaaN or apni zaat hoo ..
in mehfilooN se door, kahin doooor chala jaoN ..

safar-e-hayaat le chala he mujh ko baha ke ..
do pal ko tehar jaoN, to kuch hosla bhi paoN ..

meri nazar se guzre hain kitne hi mekadey ..
masjid se nikal paoN, to onki taraf bhi jaoN ..

kehtey hain yaar, pee ley! bas ik ghoont hi pee ley ..
darta hoon kaheen, apni nazar sey na main gir jaoN ..

is zindagi main dost mile hain bohot mujhe ..
hamzaad garr ik dhoondhna chahooN, to kidhar jaoN? ..

nafrat si bass gai hay ab qalb-o-dimagh main ..
aisa na ho ke aag main, apni hi main jal jaoN ..

har shaks mujhe dekh kar ibrat ka sabaq le ..
main naqash aise choor kar, duniya se guzar jaoN ..

By Me.
**

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its beautiful :)

system January 29, 2003, 8:15pm 6

really nice, keep it up… :k::k:

NikamiJano January 30, 2003, 12:25pm 7

Re: do lafz is zubaaN sey jo keh paoN, to sakooN paoN ..

new thread kholain k yshi per sab ko bata dain (btw kahan ja rahya ap)

safar-e-hayaat le chala he mujh ko baha ke ..
do pal ko tehar jaoN, to kuch hosla bhi paoN ..

ab aur be kahin ja k dhoondhain gain ap yehi per he rahiey keon idher udher

nafrat si bass gai hay ab qalb-o-dimagh main ..
aisa na ho ke aag main, apni hi main jal jaoN ..

:nono: nahi nahi jana nahi abhi nahi jana nahi

**

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btw mazak a part bohat achi gazal hai..keep it up

nikii January 30, 2003, 2:03pm 8

veryy niceee :k:

ghazal_kisi_ke January 31, 2003, 4:59am 9

nicee:k:

Azam_1 January 31, 2003, 12:00pm 10

Thanks alot Dilsey, Lost soul, moon face ji, HeArT HaCKeR, Vivacious, nikii and ghazal kisi ke for the appreciation :~)

Azam_1 January 31, 2003, 12:05pm 11

Re: Re: do lafz is zubaaN sey jo keh paoN, to sakooN paoN ..

*Originally posted by NikamiJano: *

new thread kholain k yshi per sab ko bata dain (btw kahan ja rahya ap): p

tumney zinda rehna hey ke nahi ???

ab aur be kahin ja k dhoondhain gain ap yehi per he rahiey keon idher udher : p

yahan koi lift hi nahi karwata

**: wave: : nono: nahi nahi jana nahi abhi nahi jana nahi **

kiyon bahir barsaat ho rahi hey kiya ???

**btw mazak a part bohat achi gazal hai..keep it up : ) **

mera bhi mazak ka part hi tha .. and thanks for the reply :~)

ScorpiOO February 1, 2003, 9:11am 12

Re: do lafz is zubaaN sey jo keh paoN, to sakooN paoN ..

[QUOTE]
Originally posted by Azam#1: *

*
do lafz is zubaaN sey jo keh paoN, to sakooN paoN ..
apni Ana ko dafn maiN kar paoN, to sakooN paoN ..

karta raha he mujh pe hakoomat mera zameer ..
is zulm-e-musalsal se nikal paoN, to sakooN paoN ..

ankhoN ki nami mujh se chura le gaya koi ..
qatraey kisi se maang ke laaoN, to baha paoN ..

safar-e-hayaat le chala he mujh ko baha ke ..
do pal ko tehar jaoN, to kuch hosla bhi paoN ..

kehtey hain yaar, pee ley! bas ik ghoont hi pee ley ..
darta hoon kaheen, apni nazar sey na main gir jaoN ..

nafrat si bass gai hay ab qalb-o-dimagh main ..
aisa na ho ke aag main, apni hi main jal jaoN ..

har shaks mujhe dekh kar ibrat ka sabaq le ..
main naqash aise choor kar, duniya se guzar jaoN ..

By Me.
**

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Excellent Azam bhai!!!

Long time no see, where are you these days ?

udaasaankhein February 1, 2003, 10:07am 13

Re: do lafz is zubaaN sey jo keh paoN, to sakooN paoN ..

[QUOTE]
Originally posted by Azam#1: *

*

is zindagi main dost mile hain bohot mujhe ..
hamzaad garr ik dhoondhna chahooN, to kidhar jaoN? ..

**

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very nice specially this one..

Dragon_King February 1, 2003, 10:11am 14

Buhat Khoob :k:

Azam_1 February 5, 2003, 11:09am 15

Thanks for the reply ScorpiOO, udaasankhein and Dragon King :~)

HeArT_HaCKeR February 5, 2003, 5:47pm 16

nice one :)