Din kuch aisay guzaarta

[immu]

***"Din kuch aisay guzaarta hai koi Jaisay ehsaan utaarta hai koi Dil mai kuch yun sambhaalta hun gham Jaisay zevar sambhaalta hai koi Aaina daikh kar tassali hui Hum ko is ghar mai jaanta hai koi Pakk gaya hai shajar pay phal shayad Phir say pathar uchaalta hai koi Der say goonjtay hain sanaatey Jaisay hum ko pukaarta hai koi ***

[sunny_nicky]

Re: Din kuch aisay guzaarta

buhat khooobb immuu g

[chacha_Ghalib]

Re: Din kuch aisay guzaarta

bohat achi hai
laiken pehlay shair ka doosra misraa kuch jama nahin

[immu]

Re: Din kuch aisay guzaarta

Thanks for your appreciation and comments

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[Azad]

Re: Din kuch aisay guzaarta

Aaina daikh kar tassali hui
Hum ko is ghar mai jaanta hai koi

bohut khoob

[immu]

Re: Din kuch aisay guzaarta

thanks janab

[Azad]

Re: Din kuch aisay guzaarta

Nahi bhai thanks ki kia baat hay, waqee kamal ka shair hay :k: