Din dhal chuka tha aur parinda safar meiN tha

Arts & Culture Poetry ( Intikhaab & Sho'ra-e-Gupshup)

Amal December 4, 2006, 12:37pm 1

**Din dhal chuka tha aur parinda safar meiN tha
saraa lahu badan ka ravaaN khist-o-par meiN tha

had-e-ufaq pe shaam thi kheymey meiN muntazir
aansu ka ik pahaarr sa haail nazar meiN tha

jaatey kahaN ke raat ki baaheiN theiN mushtail
chuptey kahaN ke saara jahaN apney ghar meiN tha

lo wo bhi narm reyt ke teeley meiN dhal gaya
kal tak jo aek koh-e-giraaN rah-guzar meiN tha

paagal si ik sadaa ki ujrrey makaaN meiN thi
khirrki meiN ik chiraagh bhari dopehar meiN tha

us ka badan tha khun ki hiddat sey shola-fish
suraj ka ik gulaab sa tisht-e-sahar meiN tha

By: Wazeer Agha**

Aqls December 5, 2006, 11:43am 2

Re: Din dhal chuka tha aur parinda safar meiN tha

nice one

takmeel December 6, 2006, 10:24am 3

Re: Din dhal chuka tha aur parinda safar meiN tha

its beautiful amal

IS December 6, 2006, 11:10am 4

Re: Din dhal chuka tha aur parinda safar meiN tha

*Very Nice sharing Amal bahi :-) *

mahamkhan December 7, 2006, 9:54am 5

Re: Din dhal chuka tha aur parinda safar meiN tha

V nice!

Amal December 7, 2006, 12:42pm 6

Re: Din dhal chuka tha aur parinda safar meiN tha

Thanx a lot guys for liking it

GuL-e-Tasbeeh December 7, 2006, 1:25pm 7

Re: Din dhal chuka tha aur parinda safar meiN tha

Wesey sey poori poem hi zabardast hey lekin yeh sheir parh key zeyada maza aya specially 2nd line :-) thanks for sharing Amal

EEMAAN December 7, 2006, 4:55pm 8

Re: Din dhal chuka tha aur parinda safar meiN tha

Bohat khoob..

P_G December 8, 2006, 6:30am 9

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[QUOTE]
**jaatey kahaN ke raat ki baaheiN theiN mushtail
chuptey kahaN ke saara jahaN apney ghar meiN tha

lo wo bhi narm reyt ke teeley meiN dhal gaya
kal tak jo aek koh-e-giraaN rah-guzar meiN tha**

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**
sigh

kaleemhk December 8, 2006, 2:27pm 10

Re: Din dhal chuka tha aur parinda safar meiN tha

Thanks Amal...........Very Nice........:)

WiseGuy December 8, 2006, 5:38pm 11

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Nice...

Dania December 8, 2006, 6:08pm 12

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[quote]
** jaatey kahaN ke raat ki baaheiN theiN mushtail
chuptey kahaN ke saara jahaN apney ghar meiN tha
[/quote]

wahhhhhh bohat zabardast ..Amal thanks for sharing
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_________ HaaR_________

farishta2 December 8, 2006, 6:30pm 13

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Bohat achhi!!

Koyal December 9, 2006, 3:47am 14

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Din dhal chuka tha aur parinda safar meiN tha

becharay prindooN ki kismat main safar he rah jata :(..nice sharing :)

Jhanjharewali December 10, 2006, 12:30pm 15

Re: Din dhal chuka tha aur parinda safar meiN tha

Very beautiful Amal