Dil Udaas Hota Hai..

[redidentity]

Aik Nazm Jo Mainay Shayad 7 Saal Pehle Likhi Thi.. May Be Aap Logon Ko Technically orrect Na Lagay Ye Poem, But It Carries All What I Felt While Lookin’ At The Things Discussed In The Poem..

Dil Udaas Hota Hai
Dekh Ke Unn Logon Ko
Jo Udaas Hotay Hain
Dil Udaas Hota Hai

Jo Qareeb Hotay Hain
Unko Duur Dekh Ker
Khud Se Duur Dekh Ker
Dil Udaas Hota Hai

Dekh Ke Kharabo’n Ko
Bay’bahaar Baagho’n Ko
Un’khilay Gulabo’n Ko
Dil Udaas Hota Hai

Bay’basi Ke Aangan Main
Bhook Se Sisakto’n Per
Jab Bhi Nazr Parti Hai
Dil Udaas Hota Hai

Dekh Ke Unn Bacho’n Ko
Jo Chalti Rail’gaari Per
Bichhar Jatay Hain Maa’on Se
Dil Udaas Hota Hai

Jab Kabhi Bhi Aasani
Mujh Pe Aan Parti Hai
Aur Kuch Nahi Hota
Dil Uddaas Hota Hai

Jab Kabhi Main Takta Hoon
Bay’zubaan Pe Zulm Hota
Uss Ki Bay’zubani Per
Dil Udaas Hota Hai

Jab Dukh Nahi Hota
Main Khush Nahi Hota
Zehn Khush Nahi Hota
Dil Udaas Hota Hai

Soch Ke Inn Baato’n Ko
Ke Soch Ker Qayamat Ko
Kion Dil Udaas Nahi Hota
Dil Udaas Hota Hai

Jab Bhi Aankh Uth’ti Hai
Iss Kaar-E-Faani Per
Ujarti Zindagani Per
Dil Udaas Hota Hai

(Ahmer)

Umeed Hai Aap Logon Ko Pasand Aye Gi..

Regards,

[Shumaisa]

Re: Dil Udaas Hota Hai..

hmm Nice.. :)

[Prince_Ali]

Re: Dil Udaas Hota Hai..

Ahmer, yeh poem mujhe bohut achi lagi hai, its very simple and straight forward! thanx for sharing with us. :)

[Koyal]

Re: Dil Udaas Hota Hai..

dil udaas hota hia
jab me ye poem parti hooN
nice sharing :) keep it up red :)

[bheegiyaad]

Re: Dil Udaas Hota Hai..

ya its true dil udas hota hai
nicely written n touchy sharing !!!:k:

[Shab-e-Hijar]

Re: Dil Udaas Hota Hai..

mera bhi
very nice ahmer :k:

[Dilsay]

Re: Dil Udaas Hota Hai..

Kiya baat hai yaar baas ya he kahoon ga

Dil udas hota hai ...

Bohat khoob

[muncho]

Re: Dil Udaas Hota Hai..

nice ahmar

[redidentity]

Re: Dil Udaas Hota Hai..

aap sab ki buhat nawazish k aap logon ne iss nazm ko pasand kia..

iss guldastay main se aik aik phool lelejay ga..

[Dushwari]

Re: Dil Udaas Hota Hai..

very good poem, Amher. nice as it captures life that is fragile of children and the rail road travel that is risky and so the drama of loss happens in real. superbly put. best,

Dushwari

[redidentity]

Re: Dil Udaas Hota Hai..

Tnx alot Dushwari.. actually i wrote each part of this poem after observing anything happeing in real that made me really sad..

[sunny_nicky]

Re: Dil Udaas Hota Hai..

buuhatt khoob ahmerr :)

[redidentity]

Re: Dil Udaas Hota Hai..

thnx alot sunny :)

[kaun]

Re: Dil Udaas Hota Hai..

DIL ZAROOR UDAS HOTA HAI :k:

[redidentity]

Re: Dil Udaas Hota Hai..

thnx alot Kaun :)