dil raiza raiza kaanch ka guldaan hokar rah gaya

Arts & Culture Poetry ( Intikhaab & Sho'ra-e-Gupshup)
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phir us kay jatay hi yeh dil sunsaan ho kar reh gya
acha bhala ek shehar tha veraan ho kar reh gaya

har naqsh batal ho gaya ab kay dyaar-e-hijr main
ek zakham guzray waqt ki pechaan ho kar reh gaya

rut nay meray charoo tarf kheenchay hisaar-e-baam-o-dar
ye shehar phir meray liye zindaan ho kar rah gaya

kuch din mujhay awaaz di loogoo’n nay us kay naam say
phir shehar bhar mai woh meri pechaan hokar raah gaya

ek khawab ho kar rah gaieen gulshan say apni nisbataain
dil raiza raiza kaanch ka guldaan hokar rah gaya

har saat-e-aram-e-dil har lamha taskeen-e-jaan
bichary howay ek shaks ka paimaan ho kar rah gaya

khwahish to thi sajid mujhay tas-heer-emehr-o-maah ki
lakin faqt mai sahib-e-dewaan hokar rakh gya
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Re: dil raiza raiza kaanch ka guldaan hokar rah gaya

lovely...:)

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Re: dil raiza raiza kaanch ka guldaan hokar rah gaya

beautiful , excellent flow.

who is this Sajid sahab. what is the name of the poet?

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Very good..

I think the last misra has "sahib-e-deewaan" , not sahib-e-deaan"

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sajid is the poet … dont know his full name :bummer:

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yes it’s dewwan… thanks for the correction :flower1:

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Re: dil raiza raiza kaanch ka guldaan hokar rah gaya

Good One Shab-e-Hijar..:k:

BTW, Poet ka naam Aitbar Sajid hai..:slight_smile:

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Re: dil raiza raiza kaanch ka guldaan hokar rah gaya

buhut khoob ji :)

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Re: dil raiza raiza kaanch ka guldaan hokar rah gaya

v nice bt surprise 2 knw tht u ppl hve enough knowladge in poetry.

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Re: dil raiza raiza kaanch ka guldaan hokar rah gaya

har saat-e-aram-e-dil har lamha taskeen-e-jaan
bichary howay ek shaks ka paimaan ho kar rah gaya

khwahish to thi sajid mujhay tas-heer-emehr-o-maah ki
lakin faqt mai sahib-e-dewaan hokar rakh gya

khoob!!!

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Re: dil raiza raiza kaanch ka guldaan hokar rah gaya

buhat achi sharing

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hmmm shabbbo thank you for sharing

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buhat umda!

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Re: dil raiza raiza kaanch ka guldaan hokar rah gaya

***har naqsh batal ho gaya ab kay dyaar-e-hijr main
ek zakham guzray waqt ki pechaan ho kar reh gaya

very nice jee

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Re: dil raiza raiza kaanch ka guldaan hokar rah gaya

buhat acchi sharing hai...

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thanks everyone :flower1:

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Re: dil raiza raiza kaanch ka guldaan hokar rah gaya

har saat-e-aram-e-dil har lamha taskeen-e-jaan
bichary howay ek shaks ka paimaan ho kar rah gaya

very nice indeed!