Dil pe girti hoyi bondooN ki aawaaz...

Rameesha · October 18, 2002, 10:18pm

Ism-e-aazam ka taweez bazo sey bhandey
dil meiN bhatakta hooN maiN
larhkharhatey howey paooN ki gard chhutti naheeN
khaima-e-zaat meiN apney erfaan ki chhagleeN
apney lab kholti hi naheeN
chand berabt elhaam khwabooN ka hasil hoye
our gum ho gaye
apni mubhim si aawaaz sey
qatra qatra tapakta hoon main
our dil meiN bhatakta hooN maiN…

-Mansoor Aafaq

SunnyBoy · October 18, 2002, 11:56pm

Nice :k:

Jaan_Lewaa · October 19, 2002, 12:00am

:k:

chand_chehra · October 19, 2002, 3:05am

Nice :)

nikii · October 19, 2002, 11:07am

:)

Sehar · October 19, 2002, 2:05pm

very nice :)

Gemini_the_Great · October 19, 2002, 2:07pm

boht khoob...

Rameesha I bet you write some poetry too
if yes, care to share some :)

Nayab · October 19, 2002, 3:05pm

hmmmmm…:k:

_Passionate · October 19, 2002, 4:56pm

:k:

GuL-e-Tasbeeh · October 19, 2002, 5:14pm

very Nice Rameesha jii :)

Amal · October 19, 2002, 7:40pm

wao…that’s a beauty:k:…bohat khoob Rameesha ji

NikamiJano · October 19, 2002, 8:44pm

Re: Dil pe girti hoyi bondooN ki aawaaz…

hanie · October 20, 2002, 5:56am

Rameesha its really nice. :)

_Masoom_Muskaan · October 20, 2002, 11:06am

rameesha baje yei nazm boht achei hei :k:

Rameesha · October 20, 2002, 5:17pm

buhat buhat nawazish*SunnyBoy, Jaan Lewaa, CC, nikii, ~Sehar~, Nayab, &Passionate, hanie , NJ, Gul, MM* :)
Amal jee thanks, aap key ilfaaz mujee hameesha likhtey rehney ka housla detey haiN :)

GTG aap key yaqeen ko torhney ko dil naheen chaha so iqrar kar laitey hoon keh yeh sach he kabhi kabhi idhar udhar sey do chaar lafz sarzard hoye hain per yaqeen karo woh is qabil hergiz naheen keh itni achhi shaairi key beech meiN post kiye jaeeN :)