dil ko is leay aik dashat bana rakha hai

Koyal · May 5, 2003, 12:59am

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dil ko is leay aik dashat bana rakha hai
gham teRa chookri bharta hai aa’hoo ki tarha
gham k bharteY huwey toofanoo ko kia rokay ghi
zindghi khud hai kisi tootey huwey baazo ki tarha***

ullujii · May 5, 2003, 1:01am

very nice koyal
ps:wb to poetry form

chand_chehra · May 5, 2003, 1:08am

very nice :k:

Guest7777 · May 5, 2003, 2:33am

:k:

_Nazish · May 5, 2003, 2:42am

wah…bohat khoob :k:

welcome back

Galaxy · May 5, 2003, 3:20am

Re: dil ko is leay aik dashat bana rakha hai

[QUOTE]
Originally posted by Koyal: *

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dil ko is leay aik dashat bana rakha hai
gham teRa chookri bharta hai aa'hoo ki tarha
gham k bharteY huwey toofanoo ko kia rokay ghi
zindghi khud hai kisi tootey huwey baazo ki tarha***
[/QUOTE]

yup nice and welcome back

Swera · May 5, 2003, 3:35am

Good :)

ghazal_kisi_ke · May 5, 2003, 3:36am

niceee and sweeto welcome back:k:

Zakhmi_Umar · May 5, 2003, 9:19am

Re: dil ko is leay aik dashat bana rakha hai

Buhat Khoooob :k:

Dilsay · May 5, 2003, 9:26am

Masha Allah bohat khoob... thanks for sharing...

Azad · May 5, 2003, 11:50am

maza nahi aya

_Masoom_Muskaan · May 5, 2003, 1:18pm

Re: dil ko is leay aik dashat bana rakha hai

kaha hei ap

ASA · May 5, 2003, 2:04pm

beautiful

Anonymous_aeee7bc69f288ffbdb12f0990df3ff92 · May 5, 2003, 2:19pm

hyy…zindagi khud hay tootay howay bazoo’N ki tarah :k: zabardast

Koyal · May 5, 2003, 11:26pm

thanks

Koyal · May 5, 2003, 11:27pm

thanks chanda g

Koyal · May 5, 2003, 11:32pm

thanks nazo and thanks for welcoming me

Koyal · May 5, 2003, 11:34pm

also thansk Galaxy...Assweet....Swera..Gkk...G777...and zakhmi..:)

Koyal · May 5, 2003, 11:35pm

Really do U think so ..

Koyal · May 5, 2003, 11:36pm

[QUOTE]
*Originally posted by Azad: *
maza nahi aya
[/QUOTE]

tu ja k -- maza mango juice ---peo a jaiey gha ..:p