dil ki ragoo-N main ye kon kantay say bhaR gya

chand_chehra · October 30, 2002, 11:32pm

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Bethay bithaye mujH ko paresha’N kargya
jhonkA kisi ki yaaD ka aya guzaR gya

Ek yaad thi kay diL say utarti chali gayE
ek zakHam tha kay waQt kay marHam say bhar ghay

Raas agya tha Husn-e-tasawor kay ye diL
khud main kisi ka Aqs dekha jo daR gya

Nikla gubar diL ka tabieat saNbhal gaye
Barsa jo khul kay ab’r to mousaM nikhar gya

Ansar ye kya khaliS hai jo rakhti hai be-sakoo-N
dil ki ragoo-N main ye kon kantay say bhaR gya

NikamiJano · October 30, 2002, 11:41pm

Re: dil ki ragoo-N main ye kon kantay say bhaR gya

[QUOTE]
Originally posted by chand_chehra: *

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Bethay bithaye mujH ko paresha'N kargya
jhonkA kisi ki yaaD ka aya guzaR gya

Ek yaad thi kay diL say utarti chali gayE
ek zakHam tha kay waQt kay marHam say bhar ghay

Raas agya tha Husn-e-tasawor kay ye diL
khud main kisi ka Aqs dekha jo daR gya

Nikla gubar diL ka tabieat saNbhal gaye
Barsa jo khul kay ab'r to mousaM nikhar gya

Ansar ye kya khaliS hai jo rakhti hai be-sakoo-N
dil ki ragoo-N main ye kon kantay say bhaR gya
[/QUOTE]

Beautiful post chando g .....:) thanks 4 sharin

Lamhay · October 31, 2002, 8:29am

Chandu ji bahut khoob!

Pramod · October 31, 2002, 3:31pm

Ek yaad thi kay diL say utarti chali gayE
ek zakHam tha kay waQt kay marHam say bhar ghay

wah chaand jii, kya sher hai. bahot hi achha hai
daad kubul kijiye.

Amal · October 31, 2002, 4:26pm

Re: dil ki ragoo-N main ye kon kantay say bhaR gya

Beautiful CCk:…thanx for sharing:)

Capricorn · October 31, 2002, 5:15pm

Nice :k:

chand_chehra · October 31, 2002, 5:19pm

thanks all

GuL-e-Tasbeeh · October 31, 2002, 5:34pm

Beautiful Chanda, thanks for sharing:)

_Passionate · October 31, 2002, 7:02pm

beautiful:flower1:

thanx so much for sharin:kiss:

arifnawaz1 · October 31, 2002, 7:14pm

Zabardast !

Hamesha ki tarha, MARVELLOUS ! :)
Keep it up !

Rameesha · October 31, 2002, 9:47pm

Re: dil ki ragoo-N main ye kon kantay say bhaR gya

[QUOTE]
Originally posted by chand_chehra: *

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Ansar ye kya khaliS hai jo rakhti hai be-sakoo-N
dil ki ragoo-N main ye kon kantay say bhaR gya
[/QUOTE]

uff ghazab ka shair he CC

chand_chehra · November 1, 2002, 5:25pm

thankooooo guys

nikii · November 1, 2002, 7:24pm

very nice chando siso :)
thcxs 4 sharing :)

chand_chehra · November 2, 2002, 2:49am

thanks nikii

superglue · November 2, 2002, 5:26pm

muaaah

hheeh
bakri
i mean wow nice poem..
keep up the gud work
and be safe from bad guys oops i mean me :p
bye bye

chand_chehra · November 2, 2002, 8:32pm

Re: muaaah

awww thanko

welcome to gupshup

Jaan_Lewaa · November 3, 2002, 12:45am

nice:k:

Capricorn · November 3, 2002, 6:21am

Re: Re: muaaah

Ek ro woh bechara aap ko warn kar raha ke stay away aur tum ne aankh maar dee? Now I know ke Allah mian ne khwateen ko parda karne ko kioon kaha hai.
Sudhar jao, naheen to

Nayab · November 3, 2002, 9:11am

Hmmm bohot khoob Chando:k:

_Masoom_Muskaan · November 3, 2002, 12:32pm

cc boht achei hei :k: