dil ki nadi maiN thehray huwey paa'nioN maiN aaj

Koyal · August 17, 2003, 12:58am

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khushboo khangaalti rehi sawaN ki boond boond
naghmaat dhaalti rehi sawaN ki boond boond

aksaar shab-e-firaaq ko subh-e-visal taak
pal pal ujaalti rehi sawaN ki boond boond

palkooN pe aa’nsooN ko sajaanay k waa’stay
pahloo niqaa’lti rehi sawaN ki boond boond

dil ki nadi maiN thehray huwey paa’nioN maiN aaj
kuun’kar uchaalti rehi sawaN ki boond boond

rah-e-wafa maiN jiN k qadam lar-khara gaa’ey
in ko sambhaalti rehi paNi ki boond boond

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khangaalti=search
kuun’kar=stone

Daagh · August 17, 2003, 1:06am

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mashallah bahot badhiya…

especially…

dil ki nadi maiN thehray huwey paa’nioN maiN aaj
kuun’kar uchaalti rehi sawaN ki boond boond

i read this sher somewhere a few days back and liked it a lot…ekdum se zehn mein aa gaya

dil ho raha hai der se khamosh jheel sa
kyaa doston ke haath mein patthar nahin koi

Amal · August 17, 2003, 12:22pm

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Koyal ahchi ghazal hey:k:…thanx for sharing with us:)

Azad · August 17, 2003, 12:56pm

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:k: :k:

Koyal · August 17, 2003, 4:13pm

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thanks salu je and nice sher

dil ho raha hai der se khamosh jheel sa
kyaa doston ke haath mein patthar nahin koi

Koyal · August 17, 2003, 4:17pm

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Koyal · August 17, 2003, 4:18pm

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ye koyal ki tareaf hia ye koyal k thread main aur logo ki

Daagh · August 17, 2003, 4:26pm

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shukriya Koyal jee

chand_chehra · August 17, 2003, 4:28pm

Nice :k:

Koyal · August 17, 2003, 6:44pm

Koyal · August 17, 2003, 6:45pm

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Daagh · August 17, 2003, 9:46pm

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Koyal · August 17, 2003, 10:12pm

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:k:

WiseGuy · August 18, 2003, 1:59am

Nice selection like always Koyal jee,
Thanks for sharing it...
:)

Azad · August 18, 2003, 5:55am

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Aap hi ki ho rahi hay … yeh lain panni … pee lain jaldi say aap kay 3k honay walay hain

Koyal · August 18, 2003, 7:19pm

Koyal · August 18, 2003, 7:20pm

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[QUOTE]
*Originally posted by Azad: *

Aap hi ki ho rahi hay ..... yeh lain panni ... pee lain jaldi say aap kay 3k honay walay hain
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koyal pani nehi peeti koi soda lao ja k...:p

WiseGuy · August 18, 2003, 8:04pm

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koyal pani nehi peeti koi soda lao ja k...:p
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Alcoholic drink peeti kia modern zamanay ki koyal hai yeh ;)

Koyal · August 18, 2003, 8:08pm

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ap ko kesay pata…lagta ap ko taste ka pata hia na

WiseGuy · August 18, 2003, 8:13pm

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Jee bas pata hai na

Nazar nazar say mila kar sharaab peetay hain,
Hum unko paas bitha kar sharaab peetay hain !