dil ke qariib aake koi yuuN Thahar gayaa

Arts & Culture Poetry ( Intikhaab & Sho'ra-e-Gupshup)
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dil kii siyaahiyoN meiN tujheY DhuuNdhtaa hua
palakoN pe aa rukaa hai sitaaroN kaa qaafilaa

Khalvat me.n mudatoN maiN jise pujtaa rahaa
dekhaa qariib se to vo ik sang-e-surKh thaa

kuchh is tarah sabaa se kahii terii daastaaN
har phuul muskuraa ke mujhe dekhane lagaa

laao kahiN se DhuuNdh k yaadoN ki roshni
taariik ho gayaa hai muhabbat kaa raastaa

haaN merii zindagi kii haraarat inhiN se hai
TuuTegaa kis tarah terii yaadoN kaa silsila

jaise koi chiraaG andhereY meiN jal uTheY
dil ke qariib aake koi yuuN Thahar gayaa

daamaN meiN aaNsuuoN ke sharaare liye huye
aaNkheN mana rahi haiN shab-e-Gam ka rat_jaga

jis ne baRey Khuluus se Thukaraa diyaa mujheY
:teary3: sochataa huuN ki vo shaKhs kaun thaa

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*dil kii siyaahiyoN meiN tujheY DhuuNdhtaa hua
palakoN pe aa rukaa hai sitaaroN kaa qaafilaa

jis ne baRey Khuluus se Thukaraa diyaa mujheY
sochataa huuN ki vo shaKhs kaun thaa
*

sigz........

so beautifull....... :( snif.. snif........

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Re: dil ke qariib aake koi yuuN Thahar gayaa

Beautiful Nikii. I loved it so much :flower1:

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Bahut khoon Janoo Ji!
zeayda uddass nahii ok? yeh lain :flower2: and be happy!

puure ho.nge apane armaa.N kis tarah
shauq behad waqt hai kam kyaa kare.n

tu.nd khuu hai kab sune vo dil kii baat
aur bhii baraham ko baraham kyaa kare.n

ek saaGar par hai apanii zi.ndaagii
raftaa raftaa is se bhii kam kyaa kare.n

kar chuke sub apanii-apanii hikamate.n
dam nikalataa hai ai mere hamadam kyaa kare.n

dil ne siikhaa shevaa-e-begaanagii
aise naamuharim ko muharim kyaa kare.n

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kuchh is tarah sabaa se kahii terii daastaaN
har phuul muskuraa ke mujhe dekhane lagaa

haaN merii zindagi kii haraarat inhiN se hai
TuuTegaa kis tarah terii yaadoN kaa silsila

yun to puri ghazal hi bahot achhii hai mager ye do sher to mujhe bahot pasand aaye.
daad kubul kijye bahna..bahot hi achha likha hai aap ne..
simply great...

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very Nice NJ,Thanks for sharing:~)

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bery bery beryyyyy nice :)

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Re: dil ke qariib aake koi yuuN Thahar gayaa

Bohat khoob NikamiJi

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thanks "Honey" CHando g :)..G-E-t..and Amal.......

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Nice one Amjad bahi but ..ap ne likha bohat khoon je ..ye khoon kahan se aia hamari post tu red nahi hia kahin se be :wink:

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oh Really …ap love that much…:wink:

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[QUOTE]
*Originally posted by Pramod: *
kuchh is tarah sabaa se kahii terii daastaaN
har phuul muskuraa ke mujhe dekhane lagaa

haaN merii zindagi kii haraarat inhiN se hai
TuuTegaa kis tarah terii yaadoN kaa silsila

yun to puri ghazal hi bahot achhii hai mager ye do sher to mujhe bahot pasand aaye.
daad kubul kijye bahna..bahot hi achha likha hai aap ne..
simply great...
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thanks ** Pra g **...wesay kisi shaier ne likha hia hum ne tu sirf post kia hia ;)

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bhut hi zaberdasttttt :k:
thxs for sharing :slight_smile:

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very beautiful…nice one…keep it up:flower1:

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[QUOTE]
*Originally posted by NikamiJano: *

oh Really ......ap love that much.........;)
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Yes really na...aitibaar kia karo nikiii ;)

kithe ghaib ho aap?

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[QUOTE]
*Originally posted by Capricorn: *

Yes really na...aitibaar kia karo nikiii ;)

kithe ghaib ho aap?
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ahhhhhh khushi se maaR he jatey jo aitbaar hota..;)

me aithey he hoti capo nazar utha k be dekh lea karen na glasses pahan k idhr udher mut jhnaka karen u know me qayamat ki nazar rakhti hia.........zameen kia chez hai asman ki be khabaR rakhti hai..;)

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[QUOTE]
*Originally posted by NikamiJano: *

ahhhhhh khushi se maaR he jatey jo aitbaar hota..;)

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aitibaar karo aur mar jao ;)

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[QUOTE]
*Originally posted by NikamiJano: *

me aithey he hoti capo nazar utha k be dekh lea karen na glasses pahan k idhr udher mut jhnaka karen u know me qayamat ki nazar rakhti hia.........zameen kia chez hai asman ki be khabaR rakhti hai..;)
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uffffffffffffff itneeeeeeee khabar rakhteee ho???? Allah kia qayamat ho aap bhee ;)

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[QUOTE]
*Originally posted by Capricorn: *

uffffffffffffff itneeeeeeee khabar rakhteee ho???? Allah kia qayamat ho aap bhee ;)
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bach bach chalna hazooR.....;)

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[QUOTE]
*Originally posted by NikamiJano: *

bach bach chalna hazooR.....;)
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dhamkee aur mujhe? ;)