us ney so bar ye baat azmai ho gi
bhari mehfil mein b khamosh tanhai ho gi
lazzat-e-dard or barha jaye ga
ajab us maseeha ki masehai ho gi
hawaon mein nami si mehsoos hoti hai aj
us sitamgar ki ankh bhar ayi ho gi
rat bhar dard uthta raha merey pehlu mein
dushman-e-jan k pehlu mein koi or samai ho gi
ye behekna ye bhoolna teri sarisht to na thi
zaroor kisi zalim ney ankhon sey pilai ho gi
shab-e-gham kat hi jaye i bala akhir
din wo b aye ga jab khatam ye judai ho gi
Re: dil ka dard ,lafzon mein bayan…aap sab k liye
Rani ji bohat khobbsoorat tehreer hey :k: Thanx for sharing it with us.
Re: dil ka dard ,lafzon mein bayan......aap sab k liye
Very nice ................ thanks you
Re: dil ka dard ,lafzon mein bayan......aap sab k liye
shab-e-gham kat hi jaye i bala akhir din wo b aye ga jab khatam ye judai ho gi
quoted part is very good, thanks for sharing your last poem and my last comment:-( but i hope not yeh aapki last poem ho, but my last comment ho sakta:D
Re: dil ka dard ,lafzon mein bayan......aap sab k liye
main ney shayad likha hai gul. yaqeenan nahi likha aap bateesi q nikaal rahey hain, ho sakta hai main phir kuch post kar dun or aap ko comments deney par jayen:P
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very nice…:k:
Re: dil ka dard ,lafzon mein bayan......aap sab k liye
oh hoye .... kia toucy ghazal hay rani g ...... MashaAllah aap kay under ka takhleeq nigar umad umad kar bahar aa raha hay ... aab aap dewan nikal he dain ....
Waisay meray say aaj tuk koi ghzal sarzud naheen hoi hay siwai ek ghazal kay ...... anyway buhat zabardust likh rahi hain aap aaj kal ...keep it up .....
Re: dil ka dard ,lafzon mein bayan…aap sab k liye
Allah Maafi ap ky kiya irady hain GET
Khan …
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bhari mehfil mein b khamosh tanhai ho gi
Wah! kia bat hy 
Re: dil ka dard ,lafzon mein bayan......aap sab k liye
thx muslim girl
sanan baat phir wo hi a gai k dewan chapey ga kon? kahin dil hi dil mein aap ney mujh pe andon (eggs) or tamatron ki barsaat karwaney ka to nahi soch rakha?
shukriyaa GN g, be had shukriya sarahney k liye
Re: dil ka dard ,lafzon mein bayan......aap sab k liye
Naheen Socha To Naheen Hay Albata Paka Program Hay :D
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jo kisi k liye garha khodta hai khud us mein girta hai wo b mun k bal.......
Re: dil ka dard ,lafzon mein bayan......aap sab k liye
Ap catch ki practice krin koi anda totny or tmater hath sy mat jany dain bad main kam ain gy khany or khilany kyRemember Recycle Reuse and Abuse the sources:D
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GN g aap ney shayad gor nahi kiya k jab baat andon or tamatron ki ho to us sey murad gandey andey or taamater hotey hain,,,,,,,,,,ab sannan to merey ghar as guest a nahi raha jo main gandey eggs and tomato pakaun ,,,,,,,,LOl
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Very nice :k:
Re: dil ka dard ,lafzon mein bayan......aap sab k liye
Very nice!