Dil jal raha tha gham se

[mahamkhan]

Dil jal raha tha gham se mager nagma ger raha
Jub tak raha main saath,mere yeh hunar raha

Subha safer ki raat thi tarey thay aur hawa
Saya sa aake dare talak baam per raha

Meri sada hawa mein bohat dour tak gayi
Per main bula raha tha jisey,behaber raha

Guzri hai kya mazey se khayalon mein zindgi
Doori ka yeh talsam bara karger raha!

Khuff aasman ke saath tha sar per jukha hua
Koi hai bi ya nahi,yehi dil mein darr raha

Uus ki aakhri nazer mein bohat dard tha Munir
Janey ka uus ke ranj,mujhe umar bhar raha.

By:Munir Niyazi

[sunny_nicky]

Re: Dil jal raha tha gham se

woooooooow kool hai thx 4 sharing u toooo bye

[farooqahmad]

Re: Dil jal raha tha gham se

Wow, just great! Thanks for sharing Maham.

[being_lonely]

Re: Dil jal raha tha gham se

Guzri hai kya mazey se khayalon mein zindgi
Doori ka yeh talsam bara karger raha!

bohat khoob nice sharing keep on sharing

[reet]

Re: Dil jal raha tha gham se

nice sharing........thnx....!

[MazhaR_IqbaL]

Re: Dil jal raha tha gham se

hmmmmm

[mahamkhan]

Re: Dil jal raha tha gham se

Thanx to everyone for liking it........!

[Bewafai]

Re: Dil jal raha tha gham se

Buhat,,, Ummda Maham ,,,zaber dast

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[mahamkhan]

Re: Dil jal raha tha gham se

Thanx.....Bewafai

[sad_affect]

Re: Dil jal raha tha gham se

Uus ki aakhri nazer mein bohat dard tha Munir
Janey ka uus ke ranj,mujhe umar bhar raha.

wow beutiful sharing but
i think may b it should b like thiz

Uus aakhri nazar mein ajab dard tha munir
jaane ka uus ke ranj mujhe umer bhar raha

[Prince_Ali]

Re: Dil jal raha tha gham se

Very nice :k:

[mahamkhan]

Re: Dil jal raha tha gham se

Thanx.....Sad affect....
n Thanx.....Prince ali

[EEMAAN]

Re: Dil jal raha tha gham se

Uus ki aakhri nazer mein bohat dard tha Munir
Janey ka uus ke ranj,mujhe umar bhar raha.

wahhh..nice one..

[mahamkhan]

Re: Dil jal raha tha gham se

Thanks.....Eemaan