dil-e-naadaa tujhe huaa kyaa hai

Arts & Culture Poetry ( Intikhaab & Sho'ra-e-Gupshup)

Greek_Goddess December 25, 2015, 2:50pm 1

**dil-e-naadaa tujhe huaa kyaa hai
aakhir is dard ki davaa kyaa hai

ham hai mushtaaq aur vo bezaar
yaa ilaahi, ye maajaraa kyaa hai

mai bhi muh me zubaan rakhataa hun
kaash puchho ki mudda kyaa hai

jabaki tujh bin nahi koi maujud
phir ye hagaamaa ai khudaa kyaa hai

ye pari-cheharaa log kaise hai
gamazaa-o-ush{}vaa-o-adaa kyaa hai

shikane-zulafe-amabari kyaa hai
nigaahe-chashme-surama saa kyaa hai

sabz-o-gul kahaan se aaye hai
abr kyaa chiz hai, havaa kyaa hai

hamako unase vafaa ki hai ummid
jo nahi jaanate vafaa kyaa hai

haan bhalaa kar, teraa bhalaa hogaa
aur daravesh ki sadaa kyaa hai

jaan tum par nisaar karataa hun
mai nahi jaanataa duaa kyaa hai

maine maanaa ki kuchh nahi ``gaalib’’
muft haath aaye, to buraa kyaa hai**

Sehr_shah December 25, 2015, 3:46pm 2

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my fav one gazal

KKF December 25, 2015, 3:49pm 3

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is Ghazal kii Khaas baat yeh hai k iske kaii misr’e ek ‘quotation’ haiN aur zabaan-e-zad-e-aam hai.

Anjul December 25, 2015, 4:14pm 4

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Dard-e-dil ki dava se mujhe mere pasandeeda shayar Jaun Elia sahab ka ek sher yad a gaya, zara halke me lijiyega..thoda bhari sher hai ‘mai toh kab ka guzar chuka khud se, tum bhi guzar toh sakti ho. Koi darman-e-dil nahi lekin…Tum meri jaan! mar toh sakti ho’

Sehr_shah December 25, 2015, 4:16pm 5

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waah bhai waah

Anjul December 25, 2015, 4:23pm 6

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Abi abi ek quote bana hai ‘aksar yahi hota hai, jab dhyan kahi aur hota hai’ Jaun Elia sab k sher me chaay gas pe chadha ke bhool gaya

Anjul December 25, 2015, 4:37pm 7

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‘CharasazoN ki charasazi se, dard badnam toh nahi hoga… han dawa do, magar ye batla do.. mujhe araam toh nahi hoga..’ ~ Jaun Elia

Greek_Goddess December 25, 2015, 6:53pm 8

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waah ji waah zabardast

Anjul December 25, 2015, 7:02pm 9

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@SabrinaB this was one of his last sher. One can see immense pain in these words. Now your homework: why did he call Ghalib ‘pachchis sheroN ka sher’ ?

Greek_Goddess December 25, 2015, 7:10pm 10

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YAR AAP kis kohi college ka professor hain aap ko homework daina ka bohat shauk hai

Greek_Goddess December 25, 2015, 7:12pm 11

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Jaun Eliya sahaab he was not a normal human being he belongs to mystic society mostly all his shayris have the impact of being different just because he was different … trance state

Greek_Goddess December 25, 2015, 7:14pm 12

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Mine too

Anjul December 25, 2015, 7:16pm 13

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@SabrinaB professor toh ni hun, college tym me ek schooli balak muft me parhaya jaroor hai

Anjul December 25, 2015, 7:18pm 14

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@SabrinaB what is trance? This word made Swami Vivekananda to meet his guru Sh. Radhakrishna.

Anjul December 25, 2015, 7:29pm 15

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*It is Sh. Ramakrishna

Greek_Goddess December 25, 2015, 7:32pm 16

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okay tabhe toe

Greek_Goddess December 25, 2015, 7:33pm 17

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chorain Abhi YE discussion munasib nahee hai yeh phir kabhi … filhaal muje neend nahee arahee hai isliye online hon ajeeb bechainee hai samaj se bahar hai

Greek_Goddess December 25, 2015, 7:35pm 18

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hmm not in a mood to discuss

Anjul December 25, 2015, 7:35pm 19

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@SabrinaB aisi koi baat ni hai..aalsi public homework ka koi asar ni padta wo kbi homework karke ni late

Anjul December 25, 2015, 7:37pm 20

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@SabrinaB ohk good night. Sweet dreams. Allah hafiz.