Dil-e.Muztir meiN jalti aik Hasrat aur rakhni hai (baqalam kHud)

Tassneef · June 27, 2002, 1:13am

A Dedication to Nayaab for her interesting Bait-Bazi against me :!Bataur-e-Shukria maiN Nayaab Sahiba ki Nazar apni aik gHazal Pesh akrta hooN !!!

**Dil-e-Muztir meiN jalti aik Hasrat aur rakhni hai
Mujhey Taaq-e-JunooN meiN ik Mohabbat aur rakhni hai

GirebaaN chaak hai gar’cheh mujhe kucH aur karna hai
Keh ab in WehshatoN meiN aik Wehshat aur rakhni hai

kHateeb-e-Waqt ne sikhlaa diyaa yeh Ehl-e-Duniyaa ko
kHataabat aur rakhni hai, Adaawat aur rakhni hai

Koi bhi Waardaat-e-Qalb-o-JaaN Zaahir nahiN karni
Mujhey ab Inteqaaman apni Haalat aur rakhni hai

Tawaaf-e-Shehr-e-JaanaaN se agar “Tassneef” fursat ho
Thakey PâiroN ke neeche ik Musaafat aur rakhni hai

**

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Waaizo Aatish-e-DauzakH se JahaN ko tumne
Yeh Draiyaa hai keh kHud ban gaye Darr ki Soorat

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chand_chehra · June 27, 2002, 1:56am

wasay to sari gazal acchi hai

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but last
shair is beautiul

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keep up the good work

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MÙhb@t kÀ ÃnÒkhå SîÌSîÎã Hãï
KÆhî ý@$®Úb Káhï kÃ®BàÎå H@ï

Tassneef · June 27, 2002, 2:24am

Shukriaa Chaand chehraaa
jazakallah

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MaiN ne jab se TakHaluss Shakir ki bajaye Tassneef use karna shuru kyia hai ,Maqtaa behtreen hogaiya hai

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Shakir se aksar Wazn aur behr ka masla rehta tha, wazn theek karta tha to Behr kharaab hoti thi behr theek karta tha to Wazn gir jaata tha lekin tassneef ko use karne se donoN barqaraar rehte haiN

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barha hi mubarak sabit huwa haiy yeh TakHaluss

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Waaizo Aatish-e-DauzakH se JahaN ko tumne
Yeh Draiyaa hai keh kHud ban gaye Darr ki Soorat

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Nayab · June 27, 2002, 3:37am

[QUOTE]
Originally posted by Tassneef:
**A Dedication to Nayaab for her interesting Bait-Bazi against me :!Bataur-e-Shukria maiN Nayaab Sahiba ki Nazar apni aik gHazal Pesh akrta hooN !!!

**Dil-e-Muztir meiN jalti aik Hasrat aur rakhni hai
Mujhey Taaq-e-JunooN meiN ik Mohabbat aur rakhni hai

GirebaaN chaak hai gar’cheh mujhe kucH aur karna hai
Keh ab in WehshatoN meiN aik Wehshat aur rakhni hai

kHateeb-e-Waqt ne sikhlaa diyaa yeh Ehl-e-Duniyaa ko
kHataabat aur rakhni hai, Adaawat aur rakhni hai

Koi bhi Waardaat-e-Qalb-o-JaaN Zaahir nahiN karni
Mujhey ab Inteqaaman apni Haalat aur rakhni hai

Tawaaf-e-Shehr-e-JaanaaN se agar “Tassneef” fursat ho
Thakey PâiroN ke neeche ik Musaafat aur rakhni hai

**

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So sweeeeeeet …

Aj tak kishi neh mere liye esha nahin socha…Thanks tassneef jee

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Shaam-e-Firaq · June 27, 2002, 6:44am

wah wah wah bery nice today i open first urdu dic and baad me comment likh rahe hain ab issko tareef samjhain ya

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good work keep it up.

Tassneef · June 27, 2002, 8:48am

hahaha shaam-e-firaaaq to phir Dictionary meiN bhi Matlab nahiN milaa hogaa

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But i think iss gHazal meiN asaan alfaaz hain

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Nayab: You are welcome Nayaab sahibaa

Waaizo Aatish-e-DauzakH se JahaN ko tumne
Yeh Draiyaa hai keh kHud ban gaye Darr ki Soorat

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Nayab · June 27, 2002, 3:55pm

Mere mohinsino, mere dosto mujhe zindagi ki duwa na do...
Mein to pyaar keh kabil hi nahin ,mujhe dil main itni jagga na do...
Mujhe shauk-e--zeest na rahaa, mujhe zindagii ne dia hai hi kia?
Mein maroo yeh mujhe haaq to nahin,me jiyoo yeh mujhe sazaa na do.....

XChorniX · June 27, 2002, 5:12pm

very nice tasneef uncle

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nayab aunty bohot achay

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Nayab · June 27, 2002, 5:18pm

Chorni jee…wese aap taak nahin ghay is uncle aur aunty ki tareef karte karte…ab humhe bhi to kohi makaaq deh …

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lekin humhe itna to pata hai keh jab hum tasneef jee ki tareef kartay hai to aap ki tareef bhi hoti hai …akhir aap un ki bateeji jo hohee…right…

XChorniX · June 27, 2002, 5:34pm

lol nayab aunty don’t worry, jese aap donon likhtay likhtay baaz nahi aate wese mein bhi tareef karte karte baaz nahi aati..

aur haan ofcourse apni tareef bharti hai jese hee uncle ki bharti hai cuz mein unn ki bhateeji hoon aur ahem underworld ki chornion ki sardaarni hoon

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Tassneef · June 27, 2002, 5:56pm

Lolz Bhateeji Uncle ko to Aunty ne seedhe kaam par lagaa diya hai ab tum bhi sudhar jao lollz maiN ab Underworld ka Boss nahIn raha naa..ab to aunty se muqaablaa hogaiya hai lolzz…maar khaani hai un se lollzzz

hehehe bhaateeji tumhaari Tareef keya karooN bhateeji, Keya yeh tareef kam hai keh tum meri Bhateeji ho lollzzz

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**Ab kahin boltaa nahiN gHaib jo kholtaa nahiN
Aisaa agar kHudaa tumne banaa lyiaa to keya
Jo hai kHuda kaa aadmi uski hai Saltanat alag
Zulm ne Zulm se agar Haath milaa liyaa zo keyaa
**

Tassneef · June 27, 2002, 6:04pm

[quote]
Originally posted by Nayab:
Mere mohinsino, mere dosto mujhe zindagi ki duwa na do...
Mein to pyaar keh kabil hi nahin ,mujhe dil main itni jagga na do...
Mujhe shauk-e--zeest na rahaa, mujhe zindagii ne dia hai hi kia?
Mein maroo yeh mujhe haaq to nahin,me jiyoo yeh mujhe sazaa na do.....
[/quote]

**
CharaagH hooN kab se jal raha hoon mujhey DuaoN meiN yaad rakhiye
Jo bujh gaiya to Sahar`numaa hooN mujhey DuaoN meiN yaad rakhiye

Wo Baat jo aap kaih naa paiN, meri gHazal meiN BaiyaaN hui hai
MaiN aap ka Harf-e-Muda`aa hooN, mujhey DuaoN meiN yaad rakhiye

yeh Daur Aashob-e-Dosti hai magar mera Hausla Salamat
MaiN sabke baare meiN sochtaa hoon,mujhey DuaoN meiN yaad rakhyie

**

*Ab kahin boltaa nahiN gHaib jo kholtaa nahiN
Aisaa agar kHudaa tumne banaa lyiaa to keya
Jo hai kHuda kaa aadmi uski hai Saltanat alag
Zulm ne Zulm se agar Haath milaa liyaa zo keyaa
*

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MAREEZ_E_ISHQ · June 27, 2002, 6:49pm

buhat mustanad aur manjhe huve likhne waale ki jhalak dikhaa rahee hai yeh ghazal.

har misraa aapki soch ke sar_sabZ o shaadab medaano'n mein angRhaaiyaa'n leti huwi tasuvraat ki kaliyon ki sagoshiyon ki tarjumaani karta hai

mujh naachiiz ko yaqeen kijiye jitni baar parhi utni hi bhaahi.

aur bhi sunaaiye gaa.
wslaam
nachiiZ

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Tassneef · June 27, 2002, 7:35pm

Shukriaa Mareez-e-Ishq Sahab, Allaa Zarf,Husn-e-Salook,buland IkHlaaq aur Mohabbat hai aapki jo aapne iss Nacheez ki aik Adnaa si Koshish ko itni Pazeerai aur Hosalaa-afzaai bakHshi

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MaiN Tai-he-Dil se aap ka mashkoor hooN
jazakkallah

**Ab kahin boltaa nahiN gHaib jo kholtaa nahiN
Aisaa agar kHudaa tumne banaa lyiaa to keya
Jo hai kHuda kaa aadmi uski hai Saltanat alag
Zulm ne Zulm se agar Haath milaa liyaa zo keyaa
**

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NikamiJano · June 28, 2002, 12:25am

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…thanks 4 sharing

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daRd buN kaR
meRay dil maiN uteR gaya~