dil chaak chaak na sil saka jisay chahtey they na mil saka

Arts & Culture Poetry ( Intikhaab & Sho'ra-e-Gupshup)

Koyal June 9, 2006, 8:56pm 1

*** tu kali C roop maiN keoN niqal pari dhoop maiN yunhi be-khatar maiN ghubar sa sar-e-rah guzar mera kia hai jo maiN gay'aa bikhar

maiN sawar loN gha hayat bhi maiN guzaar looN gha ye rat bhi
meray haal pe mujhay chor kar tera dil tujhay jo kahay wo kar

dil chaak chaak na sil saka jisay chahtey they na mil saka
jo huwa wo theek sahi magar wo jo ik dua gayee be-asar

jo tumam umer bhuja sakay na isay hawa tu ajeeb kia
wo chiraag sa meray naam ka jalay teray dil maiN jo be-khabar

wo jo rah-e-shoq ki dhool hai lagay yuuN wohi koi phool hai
ye zara se dair ki bhool hai jo hamiN rula’ey ghi umer bhar

jisay paa k khud ko ganwa deeya k jahaN sara bhula deeya
kis toor bhi nahi bhoolti wohi ajnabi se koi nazar***

Shab-e-Hijar June 9, 2006, 11:20pm 2

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very nice poemm koyal jano :k:
n welcome back
Call me

Prince_Ali June 10, 2006, 6:05am 3

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:k:

farooqahmad June 10, 2006, 12:15pm 4

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Nice one! thanks for sharing.

ullujii June 10, 2006, 8:20pm 5

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beautyfull :)

being_lonely June 11, 2006, 12:49am 6

Re: dil chaak chaak na sil saka jisay chahtey they na mil saka

nice

Join the celebration Guppies!

reet June 11, 2006, 4:12am 7

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jisay paa k khud ko ganwa deeya k jahaN sara bhula deeya
kis toor bhi nahi bhoolti wohi ajnabi se koi nazar

wah........bahot khoobb........Koyal.........thnx for sharing......!

Koyal June 12, 2006, 2:05am 8

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thanks shabo will call u soon abhi tu me sikc hai awaz nahi niqal rehi kal se phir job

Koyal June 12, 2006, 2:12am 9

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Koyal June 12, 2006, 2:13am 10

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thanks farooq:)

Koyal June 12, 2006, 2:14am 11

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kon?

Koyal June 12, 2006, 2:15am 12

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thanks :)

Koyal June 12, 2006, 2:16am 13

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bohat shukria reet :)

Sannan June 12, 2006, 3:34am 14

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*Wah wah very nice sharing koyal g .... keep sending nice things ..... *

WiseGuy June 13, 2006, 3:45am 15

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very nice poem, thank you for sharing…
Call me too

EEMAAN June 13, 2006, 10:13pm 16

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zabardast..

Shab-e-Hijar June 14, 2006, 4:21pm 17

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aww my masoom koyal jano
i hope u feeling better now

Daanie June 14, 2006, 5:54pm 18

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buhut khoobsurat :)

Zamil June 14, 2006, 8:44pm 19

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Tumhari sochon mein kya basa hai, ye kab hai mumkin qayaas karna
Kahan se seekha hai jaan, tum ne udaas hona udaas karna !

sad_affect June 15, 2006, 1:21pm 20

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zabardast koyal buhat zabardast

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