other Parveen shakir fans
wowwwwwww very nice 
i love Parveen shakir 
Nazish Bibi, Jazak Allah aap ki is nawazish ka, magar mujhey urdu parni nahin aati itni acchi tarha sey. Kya koi isey roman urdu mei paish karsak tey hain pls? :o
tankoo. 
Here you go Ana.
Mein ranG ko dekhti thii, khushbu maiN sochtii thee
Mujhe gumaaN tha
Ke zindagi ujlee khawahishoN ke charagh le kar
Mere dariichoN maiN roshni ki naviid ban kar utar rehi hai
MeiN kohar maiN chaandni pehan kar
Banafshi baadal ka haath thaame
Faza maiN parvaaz kar rehi thee
Samaa'toN maiN sehaab lehjoN ki baarisheN theeN
BesaartoN maiN ghulaab chehroN ki roshni thee
Havva ki resham rafaaqteN theeN
Saba ki shabnam anaa'teN theen
Hayyaat khawaboN ka silsila thee!
Khuli jo aankheN tou saare manzar dhanak ke us paar reh gaye they
Na ranG mere, na khawab mere
Huay tou bas kuch azaab mere
Na chaand raateN, na phuul baateN
Na neel subheN, na jheel shaameN
Na koi aahaT, na koi dastak
Haruuf mafhuum kho chuke they
A'laamteN baanj ho ga'ee theeN
Ghulaabi khawaboN ke peraahan raakH ho chukey they
HaqiiqatoN ki barhanGi
Apni saari safaaqkiyoN ke hamrah
Jism-o-jaaN se utar rehi thee
Vo meharbaaN, saaya daar badal
Azaab ki rut maiN choR kar mujh ko jaa chuka tha
ZameeN ki taiz dhuup aankhoN maiN chub rehi thee!
(by the way, background kesa laga?)
Achchchchcha.. yeh wohi wala shair hai… JAZAK ALLAH!!!
Backgroud to bilkul ufffff hai… breathtaking… :love:
And shair is saddening as ever.. sigh…
Re: Dhuup ka mosam; For Ana and
waahh
Hamary darmiyaan aysa kooie rishtaa naheen tha
tairy shaanaay pay koie chaat na thi
meray zimmay koie aangan naheen tha
koie wada tairee zanjeer-e-pa bannanay naheen paya
keesi iqraar nay meri qallie ko naheen thama
hawa-e-dasht ki maanind tu aazad tha
rastaay teri marzi kay taabaay thay
mujhay bhi apni tanhaie pay
daikha jaaie tow puura tassaruf tha
laikin aaj
jab tu nay raasta badla
tow kuch aisa laga mujh ko
keh jaisay tu nay mujh sey baywafaie ki
buhat khoob :k:
Thank you Ana and everyone else.
@ Nazish…Wahh lovely…:k:
@ Man de Mouj… :k: bohat khoob
beautiful:k::k: