Dhoop main Barish..............!

Arts & Culture Poetry ( Intikhaab & Sho'ra-e-Gupshup)

SJ January 26, 2007, 10:24am 1

Dhoop main Barish…!

**Main ne us say puchaa **
Kya dhoop main barish ho saktee hai ?
Us ne kaha " haan ".
Phir hastaay hastaay ronay lagee
Aur dhoop main barish honay lagee.

Amal January 26, 2007, 1:06pm 2

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Amazing…bohat hi khoob soniaa_jee :k: Thanx for sharing it with us

EEMAAN January 26, 2007, 3:59pm 3

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Wow,,beautiful..

insha_ji January 26, 2007, 4:02pm 4

Re: Dhoop main Barish..............!

Raat me roshni..

Mene os se poocha
Raat me roshni ho sakti hey
usne kahan "haan"
phir chehre se nikaal ulet diya
or Rat me chandni hone lagi

:D tadaaaaaaaaa

deadsoul January 26, 2007, 8:16pm 5

Re: Dhoop main Barish..............!

awesom
thx 4 sharing

SunnyBoy January 26, 2007, 8:27pm 6

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:k:

Muslim_girl_1 January 26, 2007, 9:28pm 7

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sonia ji....mere pass lafz nahi hain iis poem ki tareef k liay!:)

whats cooking ...... /What did you .... [merged]

Muslim_girl_1 January 26, 2007, 9:28pm 8

Re: Dhoop main Barish..............!

haan haan aap ki bhi achi hai!:D

IS January 26, 2007, 10:49pm 9

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*beautiful *
*thanks for sharing *

*i will add this in my journal :-) *

SJ January 27, 2007, 9:53am 10

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thanx for reading dear friends!

insha_ji January 29, 2007, 1:57pm 11

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there is no option of editing here. that is wierd

Hamnah January 29, 2007, 3:37pm 12

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Nice sharing sonia n gud reply insha

insha_ji January 29, 2007, 3:48pm 13

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thank u thank u :D

sad_affect January 29, 2007, 8:48pm 14

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It's Really Gr8 Stuff