Dhoop Behna ke mashwaray ke reply "Dosti ka pul-seraat" ..(by me please comment!)

Arts & Culture Poetry ( Intikhaab & Sho'ra-e-Gupshup)
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so nice of you m_isabah .. thanks a million for the comments

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by the way, being a techi guy in todays IT oriented world .. its always been a habit to play with codes and logics .. so when it comes to the feelings, I just do the same with words

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u r always welcome

mohabat aesa derya hai
k baarish rooth bhi ja a
to pani kum nahi hota!

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thanksssss Mahee

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V nice

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~pochteY ho wo kidheR gaya
daRd buN kaR
meRay dil maiN uteR gaya~

[This message has been edited by NikamiJano (edited May 02, 2002).]

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shukraan Nikami jee

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Allah aap ka bhala karay aur apke Nikame honay main aur barkat dale

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ameen

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very nice effort yaar , keep it up

in my dreams i was drowning my sorrows , but my sorrows learned to swim

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Ufffffff bhlaie ka zamana he nahi kisi ki tareaf karo tu log totey kar daitey

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~pochteY ho wo kidheR gaya
daRd buN kaR
meRay dil maiN uteR gaya~

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thanks Brush jee … so nice of you

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[This message has been edited by Azam#1 (edited May 03, 2002).]

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theek kaha Nikami jee .. bhlaie ka zamana hee nahi raha .. eik tou logon ko onke kaam main barkat ke dua do .. aur upar se batain bhee suno

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janab yea kahan ke sharafat hay ?

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isi liay tou kehta hon ..

zamane main shareefon ka, yea haal jou dekha tou .. sharafat choor dee main ne ..

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ohhhhh tu kia wo sharafat ap k pass thei acha huwa masoom ki jaan choti ap se

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~pochteY ho wo kidheR gaya
daRd buN kaR
meRay dil maiN uteR gaya~

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haan jee wo sharafat bebe meray hee paas theen .. aur masoom tou bilkool na kehna osko .. itni batain sunwa de hain os ne .. mujhay … woo bhe eik aadad nikami se

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kitna sharminda sharminda sa feel kar raha hoon main, wo bhe dua dene ke baad ..

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kaash main chulu bhar paani main fit hosakta, tou doobne ke koshish bhee karta .. but me is too big to fit in some chullu bhar pani

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so I’ve dropped the whole idea

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NICE POEM On the bridge of heaven!!! Phoolne ki zaroorat nahi hia...its ok...

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ap k bus ki baat nahi ye be kisi himat walay ka kaam

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~pochteY ho wo kidheR gaya
daRd buN kaR
meRay dil maiN uteR gaya~

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Bohot bohot shukriya miss.poori tarhaan adhoori jee

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waise mushkil main daal dia he aapne .. soochna pare ga ke yeah taareef thi yaan sharminda karne ke eik koshish

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aur phoolne par arz kia hay ke ..

Ghobara samjha he kiya, jou phool jaonga ?? aap kay jaisa hee hoon main, haske bhool jaonga

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baja farmaya nikami jee

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waise bari hairat howi .. nikame logon ke moon se “himat” aur “kaam” ki baat sun kar

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jahan taak mera taluq he .. tou Allah mujhe aisi puthi himat se door hi rakhe .. Ameen

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waise aab aap ke liay bhe kuch arz karna he paray ga … tou suniye

na baat karo himat-e-mardan ke nikami .. yea raaz he jou, saab ko bataya nahi karte

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ham doob bhe jaaein tou, jainge ham kahan ??
Allah mian ham jeson ko, jaldi, bulaya nahi karte

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yea raaz he jou, saab ko bataya nahi karte

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but kabi kabi be-zarar nikamo se chupaia be nahi kartey

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wesay aik sher arz hai

kabi kabi meraY dil maiN khayal ata hai
Azam ko poetry thread per utra gaya Hai

tu ab se pahlay jis thread maiN bus rahay they kahiN
kaash koi a jaiey waha se Azam ko uthanY k leay

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wesay thanks Nikami k leay kuch likhnay k leay…kuch likha tu

jo dosti nahi mumkin tu phiR ye ahad kareN k dushmani maiN be bohat dooR taak na jaiN gaiN

~pochteY ho wo kidheR gaya
daRd buN kaR
meRay dil maiN uteR gaya~

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you are always welcome nikami jee … by the way janab aab apke is msg ki reply main tou bohot saari shairi karni parh jai ge

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ne ways .. lets start :~)

yea raaz he jou, saab ko bataya nahi karte but kabi kabi be-zarar nikamo se chupaia be nahi kartey

main raaz tou kehdoon, magar darr lagta he mujhko ..
yea dost meray, mujh pe bharosa nahi kartay ..

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is raaz ke khoolne se, loog rooth jainge ..
ham yoon kisi da dil, kabhi tora nahi kartay .. :~)

chalo khair …

kehta hoon raaz, tum se hee aai dost “nikami” ..
kuch loog nikame hain, koi kaam nahi kartey ..

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Aab aapke “kabi kabi meraY dil maiN khayal ata hai” par arz kia hay …

main aaa gaya hoon, ab laut kar na jaonga .. tumhary jaise comments, aur kahan paaonga ..

yea thread tera nahi, mera bhe hay kaam yahan ..
bara chipkoo hoon, yahan paRR, ChipaKK hee jaonga

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bohot acha shair he ..

jo dosti nahi mumkin tu phiR ye ahad kareN k dushmani maiN be bohat dooR taak na jaiN gaiN

Arz kiya hay ..

ham dost hain, aur dosti karte he rahay hain .. par doston ke haath se marte bhee rahay hain ..

ham maante hain dost, tumhain bhe aai nikami ..
yea kis ne kaha tumse ke ham dost nahi hain ?? :~)

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lagta he nikami tou, haar maan gai hay ..
aab wo mujhay, achi tarhaan pehchaan gai hay ..

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hehehehe

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its a compliment alright!! rahi baat phoolne ki…mujhe lagta hai i have to warn people before complimenting them

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acha kia warn kardiya .. warna main tou phool ke phat hee jata .. aur pata nahi main phata howa kaisa lagta

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ne ways .. thanks for the compliments ..

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