Dhoka

[Amal]

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Dhoka

Safar to khatm huwey muddateiN tamaam huieN suna to ho ga jab kahaaniyaN ye aam huieN kuch to mil gaey khaab bina khaahish key magar ziaada-tar hasrateiN na'kaam huieN har ik qadam ke utthaney pe ab ye lagta hey naey aaghaaz ka dhoka bula raha hey mujhey kisi aawaaz ka dhoka bula raha hey mujhey

Ghazal-numa si aaNkheiN pewasta-e-jaan raheiN
inteha-e-shaoq ko parkha magar anjaan raheiN
jis sehar meiN dil dooba raha muddat sey
wohi hinaeiN si socheiN pas-e-gumaan raheiN
mujhey khayal ye aata hey baar baar usi
karishma-saaz ka dhoka bula raha hey mujhey
kisi aawaaz ka dhoka bula raha hey mujhey

Balaa ka dard hey dil phir bhi chal raha hey abhi
kisi ki aas ki dhun par machal raha hey abhi
shaam ke surma’ee saayoN ka makh’masa ye hey
ke bujh chuka hey sooraj ya jal raha hey abhi!
ba’zahir aam sey dikhtey huwey in mas’aloN meiN
naey andaaz ka dhoka bula raha hey mujhey
kisi aawaaz ka dhoka bula raha hey mujhey…!!!

By: Amal

[GuL-e-Tasbeeh]

Re: Dhoka

bohat umda , Lagta hay aap yaqeenan jaldi mashhoor ho jaaeiN ge :-)

[Shazia_Arif]

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bohat alaa Amal itni garrhi urdu kahan se seekh li???mujhe apna student bana lain

[fara]

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@Amal

Balaa ka dard hey dil phir bhi chal raha hey abhi kisi ki aas ki dhun par machal raha hey abhi

Ahahaa.. lutf aa gaya perdh ker, lekin yeh do lines, is nazam ki jaan hain...

[Amal]

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@GuL-e-Tasbeeh

bohat umda , Lagta hay aap yaqeenan jaldi mashhoor ho jaaeiN ge

Thanx Gul … but if I know you, it didn’t impress you much. Right?

[Amal]

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@Shazia_Arif

bohat alaa Amal itni garrhi urdu kahan se seekh li???mujhe apna student bana lain

Shazia ji itni bhi gaarrhi urdu nahi hey ye… lekin aap ko nazm pasand aai, uske leeye bohat shukar-guzaar hooN

@fara

Ahahaa.. lutf aa gaya perdh ker, lekin yeh do lines, is nazam ki jaan hain…

fara ji pasandeedgi ke leeye be’had shukriya

[ehsan]

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Amal sahib kamal ker diya.

Mashallah.

[IS]

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Bohat Umda :k:
and thanks for the udru version i always love to read in urdu version instead of roman urdu

[IS]

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@ehsan

Amal sahib kamal ker diya.

Mashallah.

parhni b thi
sirf comment e post nai karna tha

[ehsan]

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@IS

parhni b thi
sirf comment e post nai karna tha

Eik baar nahin doh baar parha. wah

[IS]

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@ehsan

Eik baar nahin doh baar parha. wah

main ne apne comments parhne k laiye nai kaha tha

[Amal]

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@ehsan

Amal sahib kamal ker diya.

Mashallah.

@IS

Bohat Umda :k:
and thanks for the udru version i always love to read in urdu version instead of roman urdu

Thanx ehsan bhai and IS … aap sab sey aek request hey ke is forum meiN naey likhney waloN ki hosla-afzai ke leeye please aatey jaatey raha kareiN … aein navazish ho gi

[waleedhbk]

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Balaa ka dard hey dil phir bhi chal raha hey abhi kisi
ki aas ki dhun par machal raha hey abhi

These lines are really brilliant

Overall amazing poem

:k:

[ehsan]

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@IS

main ne apne comments parhne k laiye nai kaha tha

Aap kay comments toh mein kabhi bhi nahin parta, woh toh permanent ignore per hain.

[_Masoom_Muskaan]

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@ehsan

Eik baar nahin doh baar parha. wah

pehli bar samj nai ai hogi

[ehsan]

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@_Masoom_Muskaan

pehli bar samj nai ai hogi

[_Masoom_Muskaan]

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@ehsan

1 bar phir se plz

[ehsan]

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@_Masoom_Muskaan

1 bar phir se plz

Kissi koh ban honay ka bauhat shauk hai.

[_Masoom_Muskaan]

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amal bhai ye jo b likha hai acha hi hoga afterall u r my brother

[_Masoom_Muskaan]

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@ehsan

Kissi koh ban honay ka bauhat shauk hai.

kisi ko nai mujh masoom pe apko zulm karne ka shok ho raha hai
UK yahan se door nai mein ne wahan a ke rona hai ooncha ooncha