"Desire of my Eyes !"

**Waving between the din sunny roof,
Among the windy rustlings aloof,
Bestowed by some heavenly grace,
The golden glitters at every pace,
So pious so bright,
As the nymph of night,
That creature makes the sun so bright,
The stars to shine,the moon so light,
The air becomes so sacred so holy,
It meant to made for that ONE only,
The clime was filled with colors seven,
Pouring forth all the aromas of heaven,
Such an enchantment my eyes never felt,
To so much ecstasy my soul never sent,
All the scents and sights of the world,
Can never make such a miraculous cult,
In such a bounteous warm season,
To stay there still,I have a reason,
Surrounded by so much graces there,lies,
Astoundingly ! the Desire of my Eyes !
**

Re: "Desire of my Eyes !"

lovely .... :)

Re: "Desire of my Eyes !"

thanx darknight.....nd plz do giv critical comnts also....i'd love to

Re: "Desire of my Eyes !"

Nice abeeha. I think there is nothing to be critisized.

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thank u so much Ahmi...

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thanx darknight.....nd plz do giv critical comnts also....i'd love to
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i m nt good in english poetry ..:(
Jst follow english poets n poetess :)

good to know DN....do u have any poem of urS?

Re: "Desire of my Eyes !"

i dont write ..... :)