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:)
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buree baat…she ws kidding stupid:smilestar:
khabardar jo smoking ki tum nay
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**Great piece of poetry Soniaa jee!
true feelings put into words!
nice**
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ab koch nehe ho sektah:smokin:
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Ab magar kuch bhi nahin,kuch bhi nahin ho sakta
Apnay jazbon say ye rangeen shararat na karo
kitni “Masoom” ho nazuk ho himaaqat na karo
Barhaa tum say kaha tha kayMohabat na karo
“Wasi Shah”
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acha kiya ke bata diya warna main to samjha tha ke bus 
buhat hi khoobsoorat hai :k:
keep it up 
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:aq:
yahan mein nay such bola hai…
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ab hamain kaisay pata chalay ke sach bola ya jhoot
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ab hamain kaisay pata chalay ke sach bola ya jhoot :)
mein bata rahee hon na:)
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acha ji
aap saath hi likh diya karain ke ye sach hai ya jhoot ta ke hamain poochna na paray 
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Hmmm…
nahin na…app ko agar jhoot lagay na tou app pooch liya karo mujh say …mein sach sach bata diya karon ge app ko:)
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achi hai
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Great piece of poetry Soniaa jee!
true feelings put into words!
nice
Awww..............
so sweet of u Brother.........
Thanks for appreciating me .............
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Depression.......
Jab shaam dhalay Bund Kamray mein….
Cigarette Kay Dhunain say
Mahool ka dum bhi ghut’ta ho
Teray janoo’n say khaai’f waqt
Kuch sooch k Aagay barhta ho
Tab beth kay tanha kamray mein
Mazi ki sookhi shakoon say
Na lamhon say yadain noocha kar
Aasaab teray thaak jaiyn gay
Na usko itnaa soocha kar.....
let me tell u....that mein smooking nahin kartee.....buss ye aik observation par based nazam hai:)
Yeh to kuch aapnay merey is waqt keh halaat-e-zindagi, yeh keh lein roz mara ki zindagi ka naqsha utaar diya hai..ok koi suitable smily naheen mil raha to rehn do
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Yeh to kuch aapnay merey is waqt keh halaat-e-zindagi, yeh keh lein roz mara ki zindagi ka naqsha utaar diya hai..ok koi suitable smily naheen mil raha to rehn do
Hmmm.............
ho saktaa hai.........
khair poem par koi comment nahin diya app nay...........:)
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Hmmm............. ho saktaa hai......... khair poem par koi comment nahin diya app nay...........:)
Shairi to achi hai..Achi talqeen bhi hai ismein...magar masla yeh hai keh itni mohabbat sey ki hoi talqeen koi shayed kum hi maanay..
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:aq:
man’nay walay maan jatay hain n appreciate bhi kartay hain
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baat to aapki theek hai..lekin aap shayed sumghi naheen..woh mein indirectly aapki shairi ki tareef kur raha tha..ab “buhut achay buhut achay” to sub hi kehtay hain mainey socha zara hut keh kaam kiya jaaye..
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thanks Dream gal N FRozen oxygen