SJ
October 20, 2007, 7:57am
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Depression…
Jab shaam dhalay Bund Kamray mein….
Cigarette Kay Dhunain say
Mahool ka dum bhi ghut’ta ho
Teray janoo’n say khaai’f waqt
Kuch sooch k Aagay barhta ho
Tab beth kay tanha kamray mein
Mazi ki sookhi shakoon say
Na lamhon say yadain noocha kar
Aasaab teray thaak jaiyn gay
Na usko itnaa soocha kar…
let me tell u…that mein smooking nahin kartee…buss ye aik observation par based nazam hai:)
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Depression.......
Jab shaam dhalay Bund Kamray mein….
Cigarette Kay Dhunain say
Mahool ka dum bhi ghut’ta ho
Teray janoo’n say khaai’f waqt
Kuch sooch k Aagay barhta ho
Tab beth tanha kamray mein
Mazi ki sookhi shakoon say
Na lamhon say yadain noocha kar
Aasaab teray thaak jaiyn gay
Na usko itnaa soocha kar.....
wow.. sonia poem is zabardast.. magar kuch add kerna tha.. :$
mujhe lagta hai k hona chaheay..
Tab Beth Ke Tanha, Kamray Main
but total poem is very awesome..
magar depress hona is not a good think dear.. wo bhi cigg k dhuain main.. wese cigg peta kon hai.. :$
SJ
October 20, 2007, 8:15am
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Re: Depression…
redidentity:
wow.. sonia poem is zabardast.. magar kuch add kerna tha..
mujhe lagta hai k hona chaheay..
Tab Beth Ke Tanha, Kamray Main
but total poem is very awesome..
magar depress hona is not a good think dear.. wo bhi cigg k dhuain main.. wese cigg peta kon hai..
han brother tha tou"tab beth k tanha kamray mein he"…typing mistake ho gae thee:blush:
pata nahin kon petaa hai ciggrate…mein nay tou waisay he likh diya tha:D
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:) acha..
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Its Kinda Ma Situation :k: nicely written sonia
SJ
October 20, 2007, 8:31am
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Re: Depression…
ahan…
do u smoke???
if :YES".its toooooo bad
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ahan..........
do u smoke??????
if :YES".its toooooo bad
Yes I do :p
SJ
October 20, 2007, 8:36am
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being_lonely:
Yes I do
hawww…
its Bad…:nono:
injurious to health
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Tambaku Noshi Sehat K Liye Muzir Hai Wizarat-e-Sehat
Pyar Sehat K Liye Muzir Hai Wizarat-e-Ishq
SJ
October 20, 2007, 8:43am
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Re: Depression…
LOL…
bt beingo pyarr tou hona he tha…
SJ
October 20, 2007, 8:51am
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Re: Depression..............
What Is Love ?
wel i dnt hav any defination...............
Re: Depression..............
wel i dnt hav any defination...............
shayad iss jazbay ki koi haqeeqat he nahi hai iss liye !
chorein aaj kal mein isay bohat different andaaz se dekh raha hon
SJ
October 20, 2007, 8:54am
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shayad iss jazbay ki koi haqeeqat he nahi hai iss liye !
chorein aaj kal mein isay bohat different andaaz se dekh raha hon
u r wrong beingoo...........
pyaar ki haqeeqat bhi hai aur wajood bhi.........
suchaa pyaar tou maa'ne bhi rakhta hai.......han aj kal log sucha pyaar kartay kum hain:)
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Very very Very Nice Nice Nice
Great Nazam. I liked it
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wel i dnt hav any defination...............
She is lieing, Sonia Ji is shying to say openly :)
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Hahahahah, Larkay to Sachay dil se hi kartay hein:flowers:, Larkyun ka mujhay kuch khaas patta nahein
Songs for Girls " Ruba Ishq Na Howay, O Ruba Ishq Na howay ":CareBear: