Depression..............

Depression…

Jab shaam dhalay Bund Kamray mein….

Cigarette Kay Dhunain say

Mahool ka dum bhi ghut’ta ho

Teray janoo’n say khaai’f waqt

Kuch sooch k Aagay barhta ho

Tab beth kay tanha kamray mein

Mazi ki sookhi shakoon say

Na lamhon say yadain noocha kar

Aasaab teray thaak jaiyn gay

Na usko itnaa soocha kar…


let me tell u…that mein smooking nahin kartee…buss ye aik observation par based nazam hai:)

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wow.. sonia poem is zabardast.. magar kuch add kerna tha.. :$

mujhe lagta hai k hona chaheay..

Tab Beth Ke Tanha, Kamray Main

but total poem is very awesome..

magar depress hona is not a good think dear.. wo bhi cigg k dhuain main.. wese cigg peta kon hai.. :$

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han brother tha tou"tab beth k tanha kamray mein he"…typing mistake ho gae thee:blush:
pata nahin kon petaa hai ciggrate…mein nay tou waisay he likh diya tha:D

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:) acha..

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jee:blush:

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Its Kinda Ma Situation :k: nicely written sonia

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ahan…
do u smoke???
if :YES".its toooooo bad

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Yes I do :p

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hawww…:smack:
its Bad…:nono:
injurious to health

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Tambaku Noshi Sehat K Liye Muzir Hai Wizarat-e-Sehat :rotfl:

Pyar Sehat K Liye Muzir Hai Wizarat-e-Ishq :rotfl:

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LOL…
bt beingo pyarr tou hona he tha…:faizy:

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What Is Love ?

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wel i dnt hav any defination...............

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shayad iss jazbay ki koi haqeeqat he nahi hai iss liye !
chorein aaj kal mein isay bohat different andaaz se dekh raha hon

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u r wrong beingoo...........
pyaar ki haqeeqat bhi hai aur wajood bhi.........
suchaa pyaar tou maa'ne bhi rakhta hai.......han aj kal log sucha pyaar kartay kum hain:)

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Very very Very Nice Nice Nice

Great Nazam. I liked it

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She is lieing, Sonia Ji is shying to say openly :)

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:blush:
thanks Arsalanh

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Hahahahah, Larkay to Sachay dil se hi kartay hein:flowers:, Larkyun ka mujhay kuch khaas patta nahein :snooty:

Songs for Girls " Ruba Ishq Na Howay, O Ruba Ishq Na howay ":CareBear: