DEKHTE HEIN YEH AZIAT GAWARA KER K!!!!!!!

jiia · September 26, 2012, 10:58am

Daikhtay hain yeh aziat gawara ker k..!!
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Baaton baton mein bicharnay ka ishara ker k
Khud bhi roya woh bohut hum say kinara ker k
!
Sochta rehta hon tanhai mein Anjam-e-Khuloos
Phir usi jurm-e-mohabbat ko dobarah ker k
!
Jagmaga di hain teray shehar ki galiyan mein nay
Apnay her ashk ko palkon pay sitara ker kay
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Daikh laitay hain chalo hosla apnay dil ka
Aur kuch rooz teray sath guzara ker k

muqawwee123 · September 26, 2012, 11:11am

Re: DEKHTE HEIN YEH AZIAT GAWARA KER K!!!!!!!

pehli line kahan hai.. kia mat'la 3 misre kahai iss ghazal main

jiia · September 26, 2012, 11:20am

Re: DEKHTE HEIN YEH AZIAT GAWARA KER K!!!!!!!

yi title ho ga jo repeat ho raha hy

muqawwee123 · September 26, 2012, 11:21am

Re: DEKHTE HEIN YEH AZIAT GAWARA KER K!!!

ghazal ka title puri ghazal main kahin repeat nahin ho raha

jiia · September 26, 2012, 11:23am

Re: DEKHTE HEIN YEH AZIAT GAWARA KER K!!!!!!!

nazm ho gi na
ghazal to kahen se nahi hy yi

tarash · September 26, 2012, 5:41pm

Re: DEKHTE HEIN YEH AZIAT GAWARA KER K!!!!!!!

nice

muqawwee123 · September 26, 2012, 6:05pm

Re: DEKHTE HEIN YEH AZIAT GAWARA KER K!!!!!!!

Ghazal ki sari lawaazmaat (Radeef aur Qafiya) to mojud hain

tarash · September 26, 2012, 6:13pm

Re: DEKHTE HEIN YEH AZIAT GAWARA KER K!!!!!!!

ghazal bhi nahin nazam bhi nahi to phir kya hai yeh?