`dekho kabhee to meree taraf...

koiDost · October 28, 2005, 11:05am

**GHAZAL:

dekho kabhee to meree taraf Khush.dilee ke saath
kyaa farz hai k baat karo be.ruKhee ke saath?

haNs haNs ke jee rahaa hooN Gham.e.zindigee ke saath
:too Hausala to dekh miraa, be.basee ke saath:

jeenaa Khushee ke saath, na marnaa Khushee ke saath
kyaa Khoob zeHmateN haiN yeh dil kee lagee ke saath!

Gham se nijaat paaye to paaye voh kiss taraH
yeh Gham lagaa hu’aa hai her ik aadamee ke saath

:yeh bazm.e.dehr aur yeh ibnaa.e.rozgaar:!
hotaa hai kyaa zamaane meiN aisaa sabhee ke saath?

Khud se bhee aashnaa hooN, Khudaa.aashnaa bhee hooN
ik gum.rahee kaa daaGh hai iss aagahee ke saath!

:dekho mujhe jo deeda.e.ibrat.nigaah ho:
zinhaar tum na dostee karnaa kisee ke saath!

:Sarwar: tumheN sitaayish.e.dunyaa kee fikr hai!
laazim hai shart.e.daad bhee kyaa shaa’iree ke saath? !!!

**

Dania · October 28, 2005, 8:26pm

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:k:

Azad · October 29, 2005, 6:27am

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hummm

ghazel_rizvi · October 29, 2005, 6:37am

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hmmmmmmmmmmm achi hey but mushkil bhe hey aur thori sad bhe hey well it,s deep great job

system · October 29, 2005, 8:05am

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Very well written with a very touching choice of words…

koiDost · October 29, 2005, 11:44am

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Thanx Dania ,Ghazal and KN ji :) azad bhai Hmmmmmmmm

MuteStorm · October 29, 2005, 6:02pm

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*Khud se bhee aashnaa hooN, Khudaa.aashnaa bhee hooN
ik gum.rahee kaa daaGh hai iss aagahee ke saath! *

bht khoob :)

Golden_Scorpion_1 · October 30, 2005, 8:18am

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Wah… Beautiful…

Ye Sarwar Sahab Mashalah Buhu Acha Likhtay haiN ..

Daanie · October 31, 2005, 8:17am

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buhut khoob :)

Precious_Khan · November 1, 2005, 12:37pm

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buhat khoob thanx for sharing dear :)

saroo · November 1, 2005, 1:31pm

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Zabardast KD jee zabardast................ havent read something with so much depth for a while....thanx

Azad · November 1, 2005, 1:40pm

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hummm ..,

saroo · November 1, 2005, 1:46pm

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here we go again

Azad · November 1, 2005, 1:51pm

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Ye Dhoop Chaoon Ka Kheel Hay

koiDost · November 1, 2005, 10:18pm

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Mutestorm,GS Bhai,Daanie,PK Lalay and Saroo Ghazal pasand farmaane kaa bahut bahut shukriya! and Azad bhai hummmmmmmmm :D

system · November 2, 2005, 9:13am

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Hummm… Jee?